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FIRST also pretty good
This story has potential if it's spun the right way. I'll be keeping an eye on this story.
For some reason, the format is kinda weird. You have paragraphs without indentation, and and some paragraphs without spaces in between them. You may want to correct that. Otherwise... Zecora. Whoo boy. Let's get it started.
An interesting start to say the least. Though given what I just read I don't see how this is a romance story. Unless this guy and Zecora actually become a real couple at the end of this.
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Happy to hear you're enjoying it!
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Glad I was able to get you interested.
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All fixed
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It's good that you're interested so far. As for the whole romance aspect of the story, I look at it in terms of what the Gentlemen are there for and that is to offer a few hours of 'romance' to their paying customers. Romance and intimacy can exist without the obligation of a future relationship, or at least that's the way I look at it.
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Soooo... it is not a real romance story. I mean, it is the Gentlemen's job to romance a client(in most cases), and that is not the same as being in a real relationship or establishing a real relationship. Without it being a romance basically.
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Yeah, I'd say that sounds about right
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Okay then. It is not a romance story.
.......You are going to keep the tag anyway, are you....
Is kinda false advertisement. Unless you know, a real one does happen.
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If the presence of this particular tag really becomes that much of an issue, then I'll certainly rectify it. Till then, I'm pretty sure it's all gravy.
Excellent work! I'm really impressed.
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Thank you! I'm happy my first venture into the forbidden world of clop has been able to yield something enjoyable.
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Then I guess it is going to stay. Many seem to think that just clop means romance, even when no romance exist. That is just sad.
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Well, if romance doesn't seem to fit the nature of this particular story, what tags would you suggest?
It may be a superfluous issue to me, but Im always happy to listen to constructive criticism regardless.
You obviously like my work since you added both my stories to your favorites list, so I appreciate your wanting to help.
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That is the thing, that tag doesn't exist. Well, it does, but it is not part of the eleven tags that do exist. The warning that just says sex. That sums it up nicely.
Maybe there should be a tag that says that the story is just porn with no romance in it. Other stories like that do exist. Though not nearly as many as the romantic ones.
I also think that the comedy tag fits.
This. This right here is the top reason I will stalk you and this story. Hands down the best reference I've ever seen in any story, bravo. Great episode choice btw, greatly looking forward to more!
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My friend… if only you knew what I was planning.
I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. I promise that there'll be more chapters coming soon.
Til then
GO TEAM VENTURE!
Fukken sweet!
Need moar.
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Next chapter coming soon.
Look to my coming on the first light of the fifth day, at dawn look to the east
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You're very kind.
I wasn't too sure how my first attempt at writing clop would turn out, so I'm glad to hear that I seem to be doing alright, so far.
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I'll be sure to check them out.
And the great and powerful Ponyboy245 accepts your challenge!
Unfortunately it is one that will have to wait.
At least until I can finish up some work from beyond the realm of cyberspace.
Quite good, quite good... Too bad it looks like it's on a looong hiatus
Then you stopped...which is a shame because I've always enjoyed the stories set in the Gentleman-verse.
Always thought it was an interesting twist on the human in Equestria type. Mares "using" men 😆...