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Not bad at all.

Well done.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Amazing as always.

Enjoyed the crap out of it. Would love some kind of kinky follow up.:rainbowwild:

Gak

Another great one! :pinkiehappy:

This is amazing clop! I would've loved it even more as a humanized fic though, ponies in clothes.... ehhh

Just a short lesbian clop-fic. Is it bad that I actually had a bit of trouble with writing a happy clop-fic?

>implying the majority of clop material isn't Yuri

No, but seriously, a very enjoyable read. It flowed nicely and the dialogue was impressive, clop was splendid. Have a duck :duck:

A daring thought crossed Do’s mind

Lol punz! :rainbowkiss:

Pretty nice dude! Honestly, one of the best Yuri fics I've read in a while! And the pairing couldn't have been more perfect; a fan and her hero! Although, it would have been interesting for Dash and Daring to use the various dildos she had. :rainbowlaugh:

But, awesome nonetheless dude! Loved every bit of it! Great job! Hope you do more of these kind of stories! :twilightsmile:

This has way less views than it deserves more people should see this. I think that sentence was grammatically incorrect but I don't care. This story was awesome it had just the right amount of romance to make me connect with the characters and made me want to keep reading all the way through. I can't wait to read more of youre work!

Wait, I thought Indiana Jones hated snakes XD

This is a great story. I hope to see another chapter or sequel to this.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

A good story. it seemed like it was short but im not complaining

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I learned from my mistakes with my first fic on here... it was two chapters, but I got barraged by requests to continue it, so I did... now it's 10 chapters long and has a sequel. :derpyderp1:

Now, while I love what that one has evolved into, I can not afford to have another long story going on... I already had to put one on indefinite hiatus (which I hate doing).

Don't take it as a definite 'no' for a continuation... just for now, probably not. But who knows?

Was I the only one on the verge of crying while reading this?

Tears of liquid perfection.

If you can't do a daring sequel (high five rainbow87dash) would you allow another author to continue on this? Even though it might never be as great as this?

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Hell, even if I do eventually do another chapter, I'm always happy to see someone inspired enough by a story of mine take a crack at writing something. My only condition is you send me a link to what you write so I can take a look also! :pinkiehappy:

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You betcha. We all got to start somewhere right? Might take a while though, what with RL obligations :'(

By the way, how did you find the inspiration for this? It works on so many levels...

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I hear ya... RL gets in the way of a ton of things, doesn't it?

Inspiration comes from various places... Fire In Her Eyes started as me writing down a dream I had (chapters 1 and 2). The rest of the chapters and everything in Griffons of War have been a combination of reader suggestions and the messed up thoughts in my head. :scootangel:

Same for Labor of Love... used the contents of a dream to fill some chapters (ch 2), filled in the rest with ideas after brainstorming at work.

As for Hoofies and Two of a Kind, they were just random ideas I had that surprisingly worked well. :twilightsheepish:

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Evidently.

Can we please get a round of applause for this gentleman? *clap*

best DaringxDash one I've ever read, I thank you sir

There really aren't enough of these Daring x Dash stories out there. Honestly, this was one of the better short clops that I've read. You should really continue this, add a few more days of sex, maybe have Spitfire come looking for her one day and join in on the fun, I don't know. Whatever you do, it will be hot. I have your Trio of grimdark rape stories in my favorites list, I look forward to reading those later. Keep up the fantastic writing!

You have no idea how disappointed was that this didn't end with..

"Rainbow, you're taking an awfully long time in the-" Twilight froze, the words caught in her throat. She wasn't sure what she expected to see when she opened the door to the library's private study room, but Rainbow Dash with her hoof between her legs and a quill in her mouth was not even on the list of possibilities. Twilight's magic encased the door's knob and whatever protest Rainbow shouted was covered by the slam. That did not just happen, Twilight mentally repeated as she trotted back into the library proper...

You know regarding the latest episode... DARING DO IS ACTUALLY REAL? :rainbowderp:

Is it bad that I actually had a bit of trouble with writing a happy clop-fic?

Yes.

sorry i have to say it ... im not into anything that isnt octascratch... (im actually only here for that) but god was this cute !!!! i just adore the first and middle part of this story ! specially the middle part, daring do and raindows interactions are just amazing :) when daring takes raindow to her house and she just looks at how dash admires her stuff is just beautiful :) i can really feel that pain that daring has to go true with everyone she meets.

ill be honest i skiped the hole "clop" thing wasnt very interested in it ... but that first part is just way to good !

good job really.

this fanfic just made it to my list x3

sorry for the bad english ...

Heh, called that one months ago. Even in exile, you never cease to amaze, Master...

I'm sorta confused as to why I haven't found something like this before. Dash and Daring are almost identical, in body and personality, so why hasn't anyone paired them before? :rainbowhuh:

This confuzzles me. :twilightoops:

3481049 Twilight burned the chair with balefire after Dash left, ordered another and swore to herself she'd never think of that again.

That being said, I like the 'Canon' ending much better.

Wait a second... So Daring Do and RD have never been with a mare... Okay, I can understand that. And Daring has supposedly "never even considered sleeping with another mare,"
But then, Daring just happens to have a double-sided plastic dick in her drawer? For what purpose would she need this then?
Fantastic story, just a little something I noticed.

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I.... uh.....

Oh.
Oh.
Ooooohhhhh...
I get it...:twilightblush:

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:rainbowlaugh:

I can't help but feel proud of how I was able to explain that bit just there. You'll never look at another u-bend pipe again without thinking about that now.

6079493 Sweet Jesus, that's a huge straw! ???

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That is indeed a huge straw. I mean, seriously. What the hell, man!

HALT!

Ze Grammar Nazi Group has spotted a mistake!

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As the social even[event] dwindled on, the Rainbow Dash and Daring Do ignored everything that was going on around them, completely enveloped in the other pony. Rainbow Dash couldn’t believe her luck; not only did she get a free pass to this upper class party, but here she was talking one on one with her hero! Well, one of her heroes. The other mare she idolized was now her commanding officer.

A stray tear fell partway down her face before she quickly wiped it away, glad that Rainbow Dash was preoccupied with her collection. Making sure that her eyes were dry, she walked up to where Dash was gawking at a hoof drawn map Daring had made of the Equestrian Rein[Rain] Forest.

Ah yes. The Rein Forest. The famous place where Daring Do first met Adol Hitter.

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