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And yes, Thunderlane is my official scapegoat for this kind of thing... :pinkiesad2:

but why though

5 down votes? I disagree. I liked it.


because it's not 'happy clop'. some people can't handle the fact that dark things do happen in life.

2606714 Suppose you're right. I like rape though. "The Fire in Her Eyes" is one of my favorite stories!


Thank you! :pinkiehappy:

And just to clear up one thing that I've seen here and there; no, I do not condone rape in real life. But come on, this is a fictional piece based on a fictional tv show about talking ponies.

And kids, that's why you should throw away your drinks after something happens to it without you noticing. And I kinda liked it, so I'll thumb it up.:twilightsheepish:

2606815 I totally agree! Keep writing; your stuff is great!

Thunderlane seems to be everyone's scapegoat for this sort of thing... :unsuresweetie:

Is it because hes black?


He's actually charcoal grey.


Clopping is fapping. Fapping is something you do to ‘get off’, which would mean that it makes you feel good. If it doesn’t make you feel good, then it’s ineffective. Therefore, clop naturally MUST be happy, otherwise it’s a tragic story completely unrelated to clop. Having sex doesn’t make it clop, it makes it adult.

Luz #14 · May 21st, 2013 · · 1 ·

For some reason, every time I see this story's title, I think of some kind of snack. "I'll go eat some hoofies."

‘Nobody turns down Thunderlane.’

‘Nobody turns down




I mistakenly added your story to a group of mine due to its like:dislike ratio (as the script is programmed to do), but after taking a look over it the ratio seems to be caused by "omg social justice" users. Forgive me.



some people know that fiction is not life. Bringing all aspects of life into fiction is pointless and taints it.

well written and enjoyable to read even thought its rape and octavia together though i must say well done :twilightsmile:



Good catch! Changed it.


No prob. And yeah, his icon on this site didn't help his cause to not choose him.


You bastard.... now I got that stuck in my head too. :rainbowwild:

Comment posted by The Gunny deleted May 21st, 2013

And now, commence reading rape clopfic that could scar me forever.

Aw, who doesn't enjoy licking a good taint every now and again? :unsuresweetie:

Well, i actually wasn't expecting to like this at all, but it actually wasn't horrible.


I may not choose the most popular topics and themes, but I do strive for quality. :pinkiehappy:


This is nothing compared to some other ideas I dare not even attempt to write. :pinkiesick:


And quality you achieved, good sir! This is an excellent clop fic, and it's hardly 'Dark'. If anything, it's semi-consent because Octavia was somewhat for it and somewhat against it because she didn't know what was happening, but lieked it and didn't liek it at the same time. It's just a shame that people see something they don't find appealing and downvote instead of downvote for poor quality or something legitimate.:facehoof:

Hehehe. I think you've just given yourself a challenge. Please write more :trollestia:


Scared of negative comments?
Or do you personally don't want to write them?

Would you PM me the ideas?
My fantasy should do the rest. (If my english were better, I would write storys. I already wrote some in my Main language, for a special person)


Mostly don't have the time. I'm already somewhat unhappy with the amount of time I have to write new chapters for my ongoing multi-part story, not to mention I had to put another on hiatus.

2607239 umm, some people "get off" to different things, duh... it really amazes me that you didn't know that.

man thunderlane is in fucking every rape story of urs camel except the fire and the griffons of war, but im guessing that will change. when will you learn that thunderlane is a pussy in my eyes at least


What can I say? :twilightsheepish:

Maybe he'll earn redemption in one of my fics and not be raping every pony he sees. Maybe.


Of course he's a pussy. That's why he's got to resort to drugs to get fucked.

The only guys who actually do that shit are terrified about what would happen if they tried to fuck someone who was fully conscious.


Not everybody likes fapping to happy things.

Happy things make some of us Very Very Sad. :pinkiecrazy:

I love this story! I will now follow you and favorite.

Wow, Dark, but totally awesome. Well done with this. I'll be looking forward to reading more by you in the future.

short and well written. very good:moustache:

>Aw buck yeah, you’re one tight whorse.
>one tight whorse

Really? :ajbemused:

2658883 what about sombra?

I want to down vote simply cuz it was octavia... but it was so good... oh the confliction...

Just noticed this, where'd you get the new pic for this story?


Took one of the commissioned pics I had done for the story and cropped part of it.

4427260 I see. I've seen the other one, but I don't think I've seen this one before. Interesting...


It's on my tumblr

4427551 You have a tumblr? I never knew that... until now anyway. lol.

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