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Azure Arc


The name is Jack. I enjoy drawing and writing. I'm currently dabbling in music production and I hope to pick up a degree in journalism.The old username was Alpha Comet, which I decided to retire.

Comments ( 44 )

DaringDash already? Damn, that was fast. :rainbowlaugh:

Hehe..........what?.....WHAT?!

188462 Took half an hour to write. Three hours to wash away the shame.

188472 I was asking myself the same damn thing.

this was damn amusing. :twilightsheepish:
What gave you this idea anyway? Temporally mental disturbation? or just a hunt for the lulz?:pinkiesmile:

188514 Honestly, I figured I would take some advice I got from Luna knows where, and do something that was a little outside my comfort zone. I've heard it was a good way to help ones self improve.

Lol. It's actually pretty good if you edit it and clean up all the grammer.

Some of Dash's lines were a little OoC sounding on her dialogue, but it was fun.

188541 Considering I practically pulled this out of my ass in half an hour, I'm not surprised there are a few mistakes like that XD

I guess IF I ever do another, I'll keep an eye out.

I KNEW this was going to happen. I KNEW it.

188545

Yeah, I figured. I know all about crapping out something full of errors in a short amount of time. You're a bit faster than me (my clop took 3.5 hours) but still. I mean, if you don't give a fuck about it, I guess leave it? BUt it's not terrible, if that means anything to you.

188561 If I weren't already dedicated to two other long running stories, I might consider going over it again. But for now, I have a Wednesday deadline to meet, and I've only done about 300 words.

awesome story bro

Dang, the episode hasn't even been out for a day and already a slash fic?:pinkiegasp:
I gotta read this.

188655 Would have been out half an hour after the episode if Fimfiction didn't like to review stories before allowing them public release. It was in the Queue for a long ass time.

188664
Damn, that's probably one of the fastest I've ever seen someone write something on a new episode. And it was really good for a first time clopfic. Kudos.

188682 Cheers. And not as bad as I thought it would have been, considering is Australia, we have to wait till 1 am for the new episode. I still haven't slept.

188688
Makes it even better somehow.

for a first clop? not bad.

not bad at all.

Boss, More like this. :pinkiehappy:

*My reaction*:rainbowderp::flutterrage::unsuresweetie::rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Well done. :moustache:

188528 Do something outside ones comfort zone?:derpyderp1: Oh geez, that gotta be hard for me then. becuase I dont have a comfort zone :yay:

Pretty fun fic. It's not amazing, but it's not awful either. In particular, I liked the masturbation aspects and that Rainbow did seem to be doing more or less what I would expect her to be. Though I kinda wonder if her initial shame about being an egghead would return after going so far into it. Or maybe not. Especially if this is taking place a timeskip ahead of her getting in a number of books.

Also, Typo Report: Near the end, "Squirting a thing stream" should be "Squirting a thin stream."

188473 HOW THE FUCK DO YOU WRITE SOMETHING THIS GOOD IN ONLY 30 MINUTES!?!?!?! I HATE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW. I CAN'T WRITE FOR SHIT, IT TAKES ME LIKE AN HOUR TO DO A PAGE

No yeah, but I did really like this. Don't get me wrong. It was an awesome fic, especially considering the speed of production. :twilightsmile:

Nice job, bro. Thanks for writing this! :raritywink:

191789 When I've been up for 30+ hours, idea's like this come easily. Which is strange, because I never read clopfics, nor have I ever written one before. But with a reception like this, I'll likely end up writing more in the future ._.

Now A Second Path on the other hand, most chapters are around 2000+ words, and they take me a week to plan out and write.

MOAR! This was good and well written for an 30 min work, keep the clopfics coming! Don't be ashamed :ajsmug:

202540 I Might do more. If I do though, I'll probably continue to lace them with comedy like I did with this one.

While it WAS A half hours write, I still think you could've gone back and done some editing :rainbowkiss: DaringDash is good clopfiction :trollestia: :moustache:

I tried to write a clopfic once.
Killed the memory with Vodka and the document with fire.

I liked this one... Sort of. It was slapdash, forced and lacked any real emotion. Really good for 30 min though.

First clopfic eh? Well then I can't wait to see your best!

Lovely little clop for a first one. There are far too few DaringDash clops out there. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your stories in the future.

3004172
Fancy meeting you here. Hello!

3004180 I'm wondering...how the hay do females have ---? I might read this story, idk.

3004195
Don't...you're too young bud. If anything, PM these questions.

3004198 I've read clo- fics before bud. More than you know.

3004202
Far less than me. Sadly. Then why the need to ask the question as to how they have sex?

3004205 Because, I've never read one like this before.

3004210
Oh! You've never read lesbian clop?

3004220
Huh, if you have more of these questions, I would advise continuing them in PM's...

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