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The Mirage


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Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash have a talk.

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Dedicated to my older brother.
Part of a 30 min. challenge, I'll probably go through and clean it up a bit.

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Comments ( 16 )

The best of friends to be the best of sisters.

Best sisters.... Forever :fluttercry:

Nooooooo! I hate sad endings. Fave and a thumb anyway because it was beautiful. :fluttercry:

Wow man. That was pretty beautiful. I look forward to the next of your stories. Keep up the great writing!

Very nice prologue please?:fluttershysad::pinkiesad2::raritydespair:

Such a nice writing on sisterly love! I know it was said in the story, but Fluttershy should have known that RD would wait for her. She is the element of Loyalty, after all. Thank goodness she didn't go through with it.

The life of the dead is placed on the memories of the living. The love you gave in life keeps people alive beyond their time. - Marcus Tullius Cicero

Essentially, RD would have been dead a second time if Fluttershy went through with it.

Dedicated to my older brother

If that means what I think it means (and I hope it doesn't), I am very sorry.

...I know loss too.

I wish the best to you. Losing someone is never easy.

god damn this just takes all my feels :fluttercry:

I wish the bond with my sister was like that. She is mean to me, my parents, my brother, her "friends"...basically she is just a big jerk that only cares about herself. Talk about complete opposite lifes.

Dammit, dammit dammit dammit!! Why must you do this to me bro? Yeah, you bet your ass that you're going to have to write a prequel to this. I want to cry like a hormonal 13 year old while reading how it is that Dash died.

~SolidFire

cool:pinkiesmile: ONLY THE GOOD DIE YONG Billy Joel

W-what do you mean the door broke down? What?!

Eh, this was story was well-written enough, but it was too short to have much of an emotional impact on me.

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