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Jeez Apple Bloom really is a bitch in this one. I don't care how old the CMC get I don't really think they should be THAT big of jerks to each other at any age. That's just my two cents though. Great story btw.
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I want to expand on that bit, but I'll use another story for it. It's a "got their cutie marks and moved on" deal but one of them did something to really tear them apart.
4811837 Oh joy. Yeah gonna be honest..... not really a fan of those thigns but I do wish ya luck.
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I can imagine people wouldn't be a fan.
It's just an idea, so however it turns out.
Aren't you switching from first to second person there? It should be "speeding as fast as I could without exhausting my wings".
Again, switching from first to second person. It's "as hard as I could."
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Gah. Sorry. I do that sometimes when I write first-person. I typically write things in third.
wait what why just bloom.she acting like a jerk