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... Alrighty then.
- Midnight Specter
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dido...
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...I'm okay with this...
WHAT
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as am i....
... She really is not that permissive
I'm kinda curious what the CMC have to do with this. Hopefully no filly-philes here.
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Same.
why would you do that
For some reason I can actually see this chapter's events happening. Just do to how Fluttershy and Angel interact in the show. Combine that with how overly nice she is and I can't see why this wouldn't happen. She thinks she's just helping the rabbit and he's taking advantage of her kindness.
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Where the hay is the second chapter?
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Whoops sorry I updated because of a few spelling fixes and forgot to republish it
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Oh you I already knew that
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lol actually the CMC aren't going to get anything sexual, nor is there going to be any genuine rape, or falling in love with animals for that matter.
But more importantly, if you don't like it, which you obviously don't, why'd you read it? And what strikes me even more as odd...is why comment? If you don't like the story, and have nothing decent to contribute, shut your mouth.
215041 I read the story for the same reason you read my comment. Don't like it, don't read it. And how was I suppose to know I hate something if I didn't read it? I usually read these kinds of things for a laugh, then maybe suggest someone to MST it. Although, I'm glad you clarified that nothing sexual is going to happened to the CMC. There was one fanfic that I was challenged to read. It involved Scootaloo... and a chicken. I thought it was going to be retardedly stupid, but it went *dark*. There being no genuine rape is also a plus. You'd be surprised on how many rape fics there are, and I would hate for a admittedly decent writer (you captured the characters very well, and have a very good flow with the story where you explain stuff, but you don't over explain where the reader is trapped) go down a *really* dark path. I mean, you're already halfway there, but your comment alleviated some of my fears. Although Fluttershy is still a slut. But she's also still adorable. I don't know how you did that, but kudos to you.
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Well the story has a short description, lets you know what's in the story before you read so you can judge whether or not you'd want to read it or not. Your comment didn't, I read it not knowing what to expect. As for Fluttershy being a slut I'd have to disagree, a slut is someone who struts their stuff around like there's not tomorrow, practically begging to get attention and in turn getting themselves laid. Here Fluttershy is doing nothing like that, actually Camilo up there described it pretty well. "She thinks she's just helping the rabbit and he's taking advantage of her kindness." but anyway, thank for the small CC there, I appreciate it.
I like this, it's adoreable in its own strange way. Will be interesting to see what happens further.
Your way of writing is very nice, I just came in here from reading your other current story. Pretty good quality of writing and characterization so far!
Watched and tracked
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Many thanks friend. I just call it how I see it. That just seems to be the case. If you've noticed how Fluttershy goes above and beyond to be kind to anything with a pulse, you'll realize that somepony or something is eventually going to take advantage of that kindness. Angel Bunny being the most obvious culprit in my opinion.
Ah yes on a more writer to writer note. My only actual critique is near the beginning of the chapter. You have the word curtains twice when you only need it once. Here's the line. I'll highlight the offending word in red for you. Fluttershy lay soundly in her bed, the faintest glow of morning sunlight peering through her curtains green curtains that had draped her window. I believe you meant to use a descriptive word like Forest green or Spring green so I can't blame you. My mind tends to get a couple of words ahead so I have to re-read the story before posting it. Besides that I see no problem as I can't really call out spelling mistakes, being dyslexic and all.
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Yo bitchalatomas ever heard the term "if you don't got something nice to say, shut the fuck up"
So take heed of shut the fuck up
this is very very cute PonyXpress you are mister pimp
I dont care what other people say about your story ^ i loved it. I cant wait for the next chapter ^_^
Keep it up
The author's avatar is exactly how I feel about this...
Oh, yesh. More please
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Ugh, I hate it when I do that
Thanks for the heads up
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Your quite welcome my friend.
Shit just got real.
Surprisingly romantic, awwwww
Oh flutterslut gonna do somthin nawtea
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Awwwww shit!
This is actually a very good story.
It probably shouldn't be listed under "Extreme Fetishes" in the Clopfic group though, as it contains little or nothing in the way of fetishes.
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I just figured it'd better to be safe than sorry
i was scared to read this but, damn fluttershy is caring.
Fluttershy/Pinkie pie? I'm down, to be honest I looked this up looking for Fluttshy/Angel, I mean come on every single creature in this show, fic, whatever are animals so it should truly not matter...I'm loving this though, I'm also down for Twilight/Rainbow Dash though I wonder what will happen to Fluttershy now, I'll be tracking this for sure, your doing a great job.
ow dear god i hope fluttershy doesn't like pinkie
Going to read. But first I have to say this.
To all those who judge this for FluttershyXPets. BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Your reading clop fictions involving talking ponies! How different is it really if you include
other creatures? As far as I'm concerned it's not all that different than a clopfic involving SpikeXSomepony.
I'll read now.
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you need to update here http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=570
plz
You need to work on your commas.
plz continue this!
Is it just me, or is every single picture (on the first chapter, at least) a dead link.
Well... Since she can talk with them. Why Not? Nice story