Below are two fanfic reviews based purely on the initial impressions provided by the first chapter (or first 3k words.) For an outline of what my reviewing guidelines are, go here. Please do not request reviews!
My first Mature story review is below. I don't believe I can link directly to the story, even on my blog, so I linked to the author's profile instead.
Megan finds herself back in the human world, but things have changed. She brought something with her, and now as she explores the causes behind the disappearance of another child, she'll investigate a little closer to home...
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/337009/the-wishmaker-megans-descent
Story Description:
Me: Okay we're gonna write tonight. SYS-TER, I got you in a technology-based story as an artificial intelligence, so what do you want?
SYS-TER: Make sure I'm portrayed in a way that will reflect in all other tales you've written in the same universe
Me: Uh huh
SYS-TER: Make sure the setting is really good. nothing simple
Me: Okay
SYS-TER: And make sure to show off the technology
Me: Fine
Ahoy, me harteys!
This be yer friendly film and TV show buccaneer here with some buried treasure to show ye.
And today, to state why I once again be talking like a pirate, I'll be reviewing "Pirates of the Caribbean: Dead Man's Chest".
Here be the rundown of this here tale *clears throat*:
Horror can take many forms. Fear, doubt and paranoia can be dangerous to those trying to survive. For Megan Williams, she must learn to face her fears or the lives of others (and her own) may be forfeit.
Can she survive a hell unlike any other? One that once held the joys of paradise?
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/337009/the-wishmaker-megans-descent
Story Description:
Hey guys!
It’s me again, back on, and very much on fire with showing you all my own movie reviews. And, today I’ll be reviewing Nickelodeon’s “Rango”.
Here's the rundown of it:
The part of my ever growing universe is arriving this week. A series of one shots and mini stories, spanning about 4-6 chapters each. During the winter, I will post two one shots and during the summer the mini stories. Each one can be read on their own, but are also meant to serve as backdrop to the main series of anthology, Something Wrong With Canterlot. Each one will offer extra details to certain stories within the anthology. You can read those stories first or these. Now you are probably
"Welcome back, Miss Williams..."
Image from here: http://img01.deviantart.net/5cc8/i/2010/101/5/d/dark_hallway_by_onetruetenshi_sama.jpg
And another chapter of "Aegis" is finished! Next up on the list of personal nightmares is Corn Pops. He meets his mom again but, just like Curtain Call had to find out, she's not quite the same mom he remembers.
Corn Pops has to be a very tough boy in this next chapter:
As announced a few weeks ago, at the bottom of this blog entry, "Aegis" continues now! I'll use the mid-season hiatus to get out the last two chapters for it and the penultimate chapter is dropping today!
Good evening and Happy Nightmare Night, my fellow followers and friends of the darkness in Equestria!
This month is nothing that big, though it never is with me. I will be posting a few one shots and the latest part of the SWWC side stories. No Hoodwinked, or Journey, just this stuff. However, I can guarantee Hoodwink's return in Feb. Nothing much else, so I get right to the posts.
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It's the midst of October, the darkest and most scary month of the year, and Chapter 2 of "Aegis" is here now! We continue through the story with a slow pace, but all things are set up now to get really serious for the foals:
The newest chapter of "Aegis" is live now! After Fast Bun and Curtain Call, it is now Starlet Radiance's turn to face her darkest nightmare! Go and read Chapter 5 here, brave squad of readers, and get your tissues ready, this one will be more heartwrenching than scary: