Commentary Flutter Brutter S06E11 SPOILERS

Flutter Brutter commentary. Spoilers right out of the gate! You have been warned!

Okay, I'll come out and say it now, and hopefully I won't break into an overwhelming rant and rave later.

I THOUGHT that the writers had LEARNED from Shining Armor, since they gave it a tiny bit of foreshadowing with Maud Pie (yes it was a retcon, but at least it showed they were TRYING!!!).

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...are things with "Breeze" in their name always freeloading off of Fluttershy?

So the question remains... does Zephyr have some form of personality disorder?

Or is he just a Gemini?

Rainbow Dash and Shepherd are walking along the main marketplace in Ponyville, chatting

Shepherd: "Really? I always liked oatmeal and chocolate chip cookies a lot."

Dash: "Me too! But even with chocolate chips even Pinkie won't touch the stuff!"

Shepherd: "Maybe I should make a batch. My mom's recipe was always good."

Dash: "It's not going to have bacon, is it?"

Shepherd: "It could. Why do you-?"

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The final chapter is finally up. I like how this turned out and I want to give a big thanks to everyone who has been following along. I do hope the ending, messages and feel of this finale meet expectations and it was a fun and thoughtful ride. It was nice working with lesser used characters and if you are a fan of them I'd like to think I've done them justice. Enjoy.

ECan You See Me Now

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Drama

Zephyr Breeze, Marble Pie and Snips set themselves on their friends and family after receiving greatly enhanced abilities from an unknown Unicorn.

• Snips
• OC
• Main 6
• Marble Pie
• Zephyr Breeze

Marezinger Z · 19k words  ·  20  1 · 863 views

Well... this is... this is sudden.

Hey hey everypony, its be, your favorite wingless griffon here on the internet ready to talk about the new episode of MLP.

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But I can promise pretty frequent updates.

Already, in less than four days, we're three chapters and over 8000 words into Close the Curtains, There's a Breeze., and I'm pretty proud of this start. Only four and a half days ago, this was a silly little concept in my head that I hadn't even written a plan for, let alone a description or a prologue.

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That's the title.

A short series of chapters featuring Zephyr Breeze's rise from ignominy to physical fitness, a place in the Wonderbolts, his fall from grace, and then his pursuit of wing and wind sciences as RD's attache/fiance.

Someone chose not to write this. Are you thankful, or forlorn?

Can You See Me Now is a story I've been wanting to write for awhile now but have workshopping endlessly. I finally reached a point where I felt the only thing to do was just write it and rely on feedback. This is the first story that I am going in without 100% confidence in its totality. I know how it starts, I know how it ends and I have key scenes in place but other than that I am playing it by ear. So for this one, I'm really asking for feedback on how you all think it is stacking up

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Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays, Happy Hearth's Warming.

Rainbow Dash knocked on the pink door. It was opened a moment later by a familiar face, but not the person he was looking for. It was Zephyr Breeze, Fluttershy’s younger brother. 

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Where is my Babs!? I need to see her once again! Please?

So here I am, sitting in AAIQU studios (my bedroom) as I often do, and I have an idea. Now, for me, having an idea can be a dangerous thing, especially one as bold as this.

You ready? I have dared to dream that Rainbow Dash can be shipped with a male other than Soarin or Big Mac. I know, I should be crucified.

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Chapter five is up and we're in the home stretch now as the next chapter will be the finale to the story. Still not much traction with this one, but at the same time it has no downvotes so I can't complain. If you are keeping up with the story then thank you and I hope the conclusion satisfies. See you at the end.

ECan You See Me Now

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Drama

Zephyr Breeze, Marble Pie and Snips set themselves on their friends and family after receiving greatly enhanced abilities from an unknown Unicorn.

• Snips
• OC
• Main 6
• Marble Pie
• Zephyr Breeze

Marezinger Z · 19k words  ·  20  1 · 863 views

My Little Pony: A Zephyr Heights Mystery.

Another studio this time, but seems like the same engine and stuff due to being the same publisher?

Honestly looks promising. Baby's First Platformer 2.0, but still, did genuinely enjoy my time with the first game.

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An episode about an entitled slacker who lives with his parents being forced to move out and get an actual job? Finally, an episode aimed primarily at Bronies!

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Wow. So this is the most adult episode from MLP. Finding a vocation is a hard thing to do, especially with a crippling fear of failure.

Seeing the dynamic between Fluttershy and Zephyr Breeze was a delight to watch, especially seeing 'Shy so... peeved. Her being stern towards him shows just how much she's grown as a character, and her encouraging of her brother was certainly the highlight of this episode's moral.

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So apparently Tooncritic has a new name, though I don't think he is back in the brony fandom as far as I know. Still here is a vid going into more detail about it.

(Obviously, I don't own this vid, clearly if it wasn't for ForNoGoodReason, I wouldn't even know about this. So give him your support if you want to keep on eye on dirt bags like Zack aka Tooncritic).

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Chapter 2 of my new story is finally up. I've still got family coming and going so my work on this has been slower than usual; speaking of which, Happy New Year to everyone. In this chapter, our three focuses make their appearance after their encounters with Renaissance and definitely leave an impact. The important thing I want to get across with this story is that Zephyr, Marble and Snips may come off as out of character but that is the entire point. How this all works gets

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Chapter 3 is done, after some delay due to work load. So far, this story isn't exactly setting the site on fire; which may be the folly of using less popular characters. Even so, I don't intend to abandon the idea. Again, feel free to share whatever you may think or find within the story. Enjoy.

ECan You See Me Now

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Drama

Zephyr Breeze, Marble Pie and Snips set themselves on their friends and family after receiving greatly enhanced abilities from an unknown Unicorn.

• Snips
• OC
• Main 6
• Marble Pie
• Zephyr Breeze

Marezinger Z · 19k words  ·  20  1 · 863 views