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Dec
29th
2015

Comments on Equestria's Pony Meat Business chapter 1 · 1:35am Dec 29th, 2015

The following are comments on the first chapter of the explicit, Mature-rated story "Equestria's Pony Meat Business", by The Dark Ghost. They include spoilers and NSFW text. I was initially going to just post a regular comment; but what resulted seemed a bit long for that.

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Report Fome · 320 views · #feedback
Apr
23rd
2018

Sorry for the delay/Feedback? · 8:56pm Apr 23rd, 2018

First off. Sorry for the delay for the chapter of Detective Dash that was meant to go up yesterday, but I think it will have been worth it as it gave me more time to edit some parts and I even ended up rewriting a whole section so that was.....fun?
On another hand I NEED FEEDBACK it's all well and good liking my stories but I need to know it's flaws too so I can improve further chapters. Thank you for the likes so far but please try to leave a comment after a read. Thanks.

Report Fard Overload · 70 views · #Feedback
Jan
2nd
2019

Feedback · 10:46pm Jan 2nd, 2019

Hey, guys.
I've posted several chapters, now, but I don't know if anyone is reading them.
Feedback is really highly valued. Even if it's just a comment on a chapter with no real feedback, but just commenting on the story.

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Report Kaity-Kat · 81 views · #feedback
Apr
18th
2016

I don't know anymore. · 1:09pm Apr 18th, 2016

I feel so many different emotions at once right now. It doesn't seem real. I just don't know. I mean, I'm proud of my story and everything, but I feel so insecure. If you don't like my stories, please give me tips on how to improve my writing. Don't just say "it's shit". That's just crass. I want to improve, but I can't if nopony tells me how.

Report PuzzlingInsanity · 126 views · #feedback
Aug
30th
2017

Understanding your Feedback Personality type · 4:01am Aug 30th, 2017

I recently finished rereading the book: Thanks for the Feedback. I highly recommend it as it's chock full of good life advice about how to actually give and receive feedback.

But what really struck me about the book was one chapter that described what I'm going to call "Feedback personality types." These are just the way in general in which we respond to getting feedback from others.

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Jul
17th
2016

Rejected From EQD · 12:07am Jul 17th, 2016

Well, I finally got around to try and see if Roses was good enough for EQD. Apparently... the answer is no. While they didn't put a strike against me, but the rejection is a bit disheartening. It doesn't help that they didn't give examples, so it leaves me at a loss as to what I could do.

Here's what I was told:

It's a long enough story that I can't delve into detailed instances, or I'd have time for little else, but the broad things I see are these:

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Report Mordy · 471 views · #feedback #EQD
Apr
24th
2018

I would greatly appreciate more feedback from my readers for Flesh and Bone. · 9:50am Apr 24th, 2018

The latest chapter of Flesh and Bone has been posted. I would greatly appreciate any comments people have on the story, especially in regards to character development, growth, and tone. Please remember I intend to convert this story to Original Fiction and publish it later. Your input is very helpful for this process as it will allow the second draft to fix problems, or develop things which are interesting but were missed this first time around.

Nov
11th
2015

What's Going On · 2:28pm Nov 11th, 2015

Hello everypony.

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Report Crimson Twilight · 115 views · #News #Feedback
Sep
16th
2016

It's 6am, the cars outside, full of gas. And i'm not going anywhere. Do glasses count as shades? Let's go. · 10:16am Sep 16th, 2016

Sorry if I ramble, i run long, or a seem to meander in words. About to lay down, and an allergy attack hits. Anyhow, something interesting to talk about, ramble on, much as led zepplin did, and keep singing my song.

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Mar
17th
2016

Feedback on A New Dawn, New Chapter Ideas · 10:14am Mar 17th, 2016

So here's the deal, I'm not sure how want the next chapter to play out. I know what I want it to end like, but it's the execution of it that I'm having trouble with. I wrote maybe a quarter, or so, of it, but I just don't like it. If you have any idea, or maybe you want to see something, now is the time to say. Maybe even a character you want to see?

So, if you're interested in seeing something now is the time to say so. :twilightsmile: I might even consider it! :trollestia:

May
12th
2016

Survey and feedback · 3:15pm May 12th, 2016

This is just something I like to do once in a while, to get some feedback from my watchers on how I'm doing. I'd greatly appreciate you taking the time to answer these questions. Thanks!

1. How did you first find my work?
2. What made you decide to follow me in the first place?
3. What is a) your favourite and b) your least favourite of my fics, and why?
4. What do you like the most about my writing?
5. What do you think needs improvement?

Report Shamrock95 · 223 views · #survey #feedback
Jan
21st
2016

So, what is going on here? · 9:13pm Jan 21st, 2016

Hey everypony! Now, things seem to be coming along nicely with Penny and Stick (oh noez, there is a but here? flash to picture of pony waving their flank ) but I write too much! Seriously, and what is worse, if I keep crossing over/collabing with David, well, things would get very skewed very quickly. So in short ( flash to a picture of the CMC ) I am thinking of starting another little series, with maybe-daily maybe-irregular updates, or even just do a series of short bits (

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Report Damaged · 144 views · #Feedback #SilverVerse
Sep
7th
2015

Cover-Art for A New Dawn! + Other News · 5:02am Sep 7th, 2015

Hello everypony!

As thou might notice I just got some Cover-Art by a nice guy named Zeotic-Zebra. This is huge for me as it feels one step closer to completion! (Don't worry, there are many more chapters coming.) As I mentioned in the previous blog post I'm going on a military course next weekend and that means that I won't have as much time to write this week.

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Report Crimson Twilight · 142 views · #News #Feedback
Mar
2nd
2017

Would you read this? · 11:12pm Mar 2nd, 2017

A story about 6 friends (2 unicorns, 2 earth ponies and 2 pegasi) on a crazy weird trip to Las Pegasus (trying to NOT make it sound generic).

OR

A story about a young colt lost in the unknown wilderness with nothing but a hatchet, a torch and a Labrador Retriever as help.

Jul
10th
2015

Anyone find these kinks particularly interesting? · 9:35am Jul 10th, 2015

Well I've written a few of these into my stories so far, but I wanted to know what you guys thought about these particular fetishes, that aren't normally tagged, and if you find them as sexy as I do.

-Destroying Clothing
Nothing says a person is going to be naked for a while like this. Anything from outright burning clothes, or simply removing anything and everything they could use to cover their body from the area.

-Recording

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Nov
7th
2016

I want some feedback on a story idea: · 5:22am Nov 7th, 2016

Now that I no longer have any "crazyfics" that I'm actively working on, I have just come up with an idea:

What if Twilight is sent back in time, and meets Gen-1 ponies?

Based on what I've seen before of gen 1 on Youtube, I'm guessing that it'll be quite a comedic multi-chapter story. :twilightsmile:

Give me some thoughts and opinions in the comments, as well.

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Nov
11th
2016

please answer honestly · 1:34am Nov 11th, 2016

I've noticed that throughout my fic-writing career I haven't really gotten much feedback on anything, with the exception of I Don't Swing that Way. This really shouldn't bother me but it does. I guess I just have a great fear of the unknown.

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Report MLPro · 325 views · #feedback #review #politics
Apr
17th
2016

EQD Submission - Good News and Bad News · 9:09pm Apr 17th, 2016

So, I submitted Anima, The Creation of a Princess to EQD, and much like with The Princess and the Seamstress there was nothing wrong with the story itself, but there is one characterization thing I need to fix and a bunch of tonal and grammatical fixes.

As such, those will be coming post-haste (once I get out of the Dark Souls III Abyss, so I'll probably start later tonight.)

Jun
12th
2016

The story behind the story: Lapis and company · 7:28pm Jun 12th, 2016

I was introduced to the Pony side of the world in the fall of 2010, and took to the writing and characters immediately. I was blown away with the intelligence of the storytelling, as "little girls shows" from the past tend to be giggly affairs with lots of pink, frilly dresses, talk about fashion, talk about boyfriends, and other inane things that don't normally keep my attention. As a tomboy from the 80s I watched the cartoons that were more action-packed, like GI Joe, Transformers, M.A.S.K.

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Apr
18th
2018

Divergence - The conclusion to the Crystal Ball Trilogy · 8:19pm Apr 18th, 2018

Hello, everypony! I have an announcement to make. You might already be able to guess what it is!

A great evil is destroyed and its wards are so too. But now a fragment of that evil is on the loose and is unchecked.

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