Where can I get in-depth OC analysis/feedback · 6:17am Jun 24th, 2015
I have a LOT of OC's.
I have a LOT of OC's.
I'm looking for a bit of constructive feedback on one of my stories, The Edge. The tone was a lot darker and the story was generally more descriptive than I usually write.
I also wrote the first half on paper, so I had to type it out before I continued writing. I think that may have improved the quality of writing, did anyone notice that? Should I do it more often?
Come on.... three more reviews and a new chapter. Hell, I'm already halfway through writing the steamy action!
Hello dear readers, Warrior Priest here. I'm reaching out to you all today with a humble question. Well, maybe it's not to humble. You see, I have had a few ideas for stories floating around in my head, some even have a full synopsis and chapter lists. But, being so abound with energy and inspiration can be a detriment as much as it is a blessing. I simply cannot decide which story to focus on writing next. That is where you all come in. I ask that you consider the following options, and give
Hello readers! So last night, I finished up episode seven of Fireteam Freelance, titled Missing Persons.
Howdy folks, Chaos here. After a long time of inactivity on this site, I have decided to give it a go once again. Now, I have found myself wanting to continue We're Not In Europe Anymore, however, after rereading the chapters that are currently posted, I instantly lost a great deal of will to do so. These are the main reasons why:
Hello, PaleFace here. Do you enjoy themes of conflict? Scenes of violence? Inconsistent characterisation? Well boy do I have a story (or two) for you.
Presenting: any of my works. Enjoy.
Presently I am writing chapters for both Bounty on the Frontier and Arcane Bonds .
First, I came through Harvey all right. I was well away from the winds for landfall, and I was on high ground with good drainage for the 25+ inches of rain that fell at my house. And, thankfully, one of the roads leading out of where I live reopened just barely in time for me to travel to this weekend's convention for selling things.
Second, today I had yet another complaint about the footnotes.
Proofreading for Volume 2 is nearly complete. However, I recall shortly after making Volume 1 available in printed form that some readers had difficulty discerning where chapters ended and the next began despite the titles of each chapter being front and center at the top of the page.
What can I do to fix this problem? Increase the size of the title text? Bolden the text? Underline it?
So, with the last few chapters mostly written out, I'd like to do some revision on the already posted chapters. I'd like to know if anyone here has any criticisms that I might use to work on the story, because I'm my own worst critic, and I know better than to sit here for a month revising it instead of finishing it.
Here are some issues that I think are there but would like second thoughts on, because I'm not really sure how prevalent they are to other people...
Howdy folks, GeneralChaos here writing you in the heat of the night. I know it has been a long while since I've been heard from, especially in a way as this, but I'm making this post to give a brief update on We're Not In Europe Anymore...
I've been receiving some strong signals that a certain scene early on in FiMC was well received, and it made me wonder: how did you stumble across the story, and which scene was your favourite? Discuss!
Hear me out, this has been bugging me for awhile.
Hi everyone.
To all my regular readers, I wondered if I could ask a little more specific feedback.
My last chapter was one of my longest and one that rather escalated things with the Mane 6 now personally facing some of the villains and more villains going after the secondary characters. But I haven't got much summary as the other chapters yet.
I might just be impatient but I'm kind of worried I'm going overboard or whether I'm making the Mane 6 look too unprepared for this.
If I can't get your review on your story from reviews and feedbacks then I'm busy on vacation and will not get to you until I'm done with vacation...
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Fall IS COMING!!!! Horror and death will be coming soon!!!!!! Make sure you post your best work for Halloween and post them here on this blog post.
So i think it goes without saying I love to write, I love making stories, I love it that my works seemingly makes so many people happy. So to ensure I keep writing that is why I ask you guys to post your comments upvote and give me feedback so I can improve and keep writing more stuff. The more of you who ask for more chapters and sequels the more stories I will make and complete.
Hello again! Been way too long, hasn't it?
A hit from Rainbow Dash just got 1k views :D
So I think is time to move on...
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Hey so I got about 4 chapters of a fic done that I haven't posted, but am actively writing more of from time to time. I wasn't planning on publishing it until I end Star Drop (which will be soon), but I'm having problems getting Star Drop's ending just right. Anyone want me to post what I got? Chapter at a time, spaced out and the like.