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MajorPaleFace


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  • 28 weeks
    Return to Sender

    Hello, PaleFace here. Do you enjoy themes of conflict? Scenes of violence? Inconsistent characterisation? Well boy do I have a story (or two) for you.

    Presenting: any of my works. Enjoy.

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  • 77 weeks
    I have returned

    So, I have returned to writing after a two-year hiatus. The main reason for this was that towards the end of 2019 I was in a bad place in my head, I was working 60+hours a week, ten days a row, earning big £££, and drinking every day. Stress was high, as was my living disappointment. I discovered I had underlying health conditions preventing me from military service (my childhood aspiration) my

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  • 207 weeks
    Final Act

    So it's been two years, almost 200k words. And while definitely not perfect, I'm really happy with the outcome. Two years ago I set out with the goal of picking up better-writing habits, practising my grammar and sentence structure. (Which may not always be stellar)

    I had absolutely no plan in place which I think is why this ended up being such a girthy fic.

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  • 230 weeks
    Clarification

    Hey all.

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  • 255 weeks
    Stuff

    Firstly I'd like to say that this took a little longer for a few reasons:

    I was in the hospital for ten days - nothing too serious, during my stay I wrote the majority of this - minus the final battle scene. I also spent much of my time there reediting the reactor scenes in chapters one through three. This was a real arseache to do.

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Oct
12th
2023

Return to Sender · 5:14pm Oct 12th, 2023

Hello, PaleFace here. Do you enjoy themes of conflict? Scenes of violence? Inconsistent characterisation? Well boy do I have a story (or two) for you.

Presenting: any of my works. Enjoy.

Presently I am writing chapters for both Bounty on the Frontier and Arcane Bonds .

BOTF is a sort of hybrid universe of MLP, with splashes of the wild west and modern day narcotics and gang violence. It's a bit of a mixing pot as far as themes go, but I think they mesh quite well in a fantasy sort of setting. I'll admit there is a middle portion which is a bit slow and kind of stalls the pacing. But I'd appreciate any feedback or opinions anyone has.

Arcane Bonds is my newest thing. I've recently gotten into WH40k lore and decided to create something of a mish mash. Again I tend to utilize a more "real world" stylised MLP universe with themes of greed and corruption, and also I created a new antagonist force based on the Piglins from Minecraft (of all places). While also just taking OC characters from the WH40k universe and plopping them straight into this new setting without rhyme or reason and letting the action begin.

Between all the combat and descriptive scenes there is some hollow dialogue, it's not my strong point whatsoever. So bear with me on that.

Anyway to whomever reads this. Hope you enjoy, please leave some comments. God bless.

-PaleFace

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