After re-watching Stare Master and Show Stoppers back-to-back, I remember why I disliked the crusaders in the early years. Looking back, I find these two episodes delightful for what they are, and I, of course marvel at how far Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom, and Scootaloo have come.
9 months and 5 days ago we started writing. 103 Chapters later, and we've finally reached 200 upvotes.
Congrats, writers, and thank you, readers for all your participation, comments, and views.
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Clip clop, clip clop...
Sweetie Belle is awoken in the middle of her Hearth's Warming Eve slumber to hear hooves on the roof. Sweetie Belle, being the curious filly she is, decides to investigate.
Okay. Voting for my next story over. And the winner is:
'A Dragon's Nature'
Yes, with 32 votes, 'A Dragon's Nature' won.
The one with the second most votes was, 'Just a scepter, right?' with 22 votes.
Then, 'The Great and Controlled Trixie', with 13 votes
'The Bracelet' with 12
And lastly, 'Timberwolf', with 8 votes.
I was reading the first chapter of "Journeys and Destinations: A Friendship for Eternity" again because of its anniversary and discovered that there are still a couple mistakes in it.
I went over them now, fixed them and improved the chapter a little. I figured it would be appropriate today, on the anniversary, to give it a little makeover.
The changes are nothing major; just a few replaced words, removed a comma that was too much and rearranged one or two sentences.
We got our spoilers! We got our spoilers!
This is the episode that Hasbro decided to air for FiM's fifth anniversary, and what an episode it is! It has so much packed into it, and so many twists, that it could stand as two or three episodes, if only we had the time.
The Plot
Hey again. The second chapter of Magic School Zord is done. I had a lot of fun writing this chapter. Writing wonder and excitement at new things is one of my most favorite thing to do, and what is more amazing than going to the moon? I hope you like the chapter. Happy new year.
Hello again. The third chapter of Magic School Zord is done. I added a lot of real science in this chapter because I like adding real stuff to my stories. I could have used the comics' canon for what the moon is like, but decided against it. I would rather use real science. I don't know if that makes me lazy and I should have made things more magical and imaginative, but it's just my style.
Me: Okay we're gonna write tonight. SYS-TER, I got you in a technology-based story as an artificial intelligence, so what do you want?
SYS-TER: Make sure I'm portrayed in a way that will reflect in all other tales you've written in the same universe
Me: Uh huh
SYS-TER: Make sure the setting is really good. nothing simple
Me: Okay
SYS-TER: And make sure to show off the technology
Me: Fine
Firstly, firstly, firstly… a shout out for Arian Blaze, a friend of mine who's got a tiring week ahead of her 
but is on 99 followers, so please somebody push her into triple digits! 
Secondly, I've been doing a bit of editing and proofreading lately. Mostly little one-shot stories, because I don't have the patience for anything long. I keep a bookshelf of stuff I've edited and proofread here:
Here's another scene that I have in mind for the sequel of A Sweetie Dreamland and that I hope to place somewhere. The idea was just so surealist that I just had to do it. Enjoy!
"You mean that YOU actually almost managed to conquer your whole universe?" asked Wolf. "By the way, I fold."
"Yes. Twice." Bowser eyed him. "Why are you so surprised?"
"Because you act like an idiot most of the times," laughed Hades.
So long have we waited for
A light upon our flanks
So long have we been patient for the day
When we can walk among the ranks
Of other ponies with cutie marks and proudly say
Finally, we crusaders three
Have earned our cutie marks
After everything we have been through
We got our cutie marks
After all the bumps in the road
We walked just to get here
We crusaders three now finally
Have earned our cutie marks
When we first met each other
We quickly all became best friends
Hello again. I have a new story. It's called Magic School Zord. It stars Cheerilee. As the name implies, it's about Cheerilee using her Zord for a fantastical school trip. Where? The moon of course! This is a silly idea that floated in my head that I wanted to make reality and I thought Cheerilee deserves more love. I think she is the most underappreciated of the Luna 6.
Yes, my most disgusting and depraved story gets another chapters. Things get more insane and horrifying and someone might even die. Sex, Murders, Zombies, Dragon Bitches beating some mad whores, all on the next chapter of Stuck In Place.
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Hey again. Magic School Zord is finally finished. To be honest, I don't think this was my best. I am happy with it for the most part, but there are some parts I made some mistakes in. The biggest one is that it took me forever to find a voice for all the foal characters. I just couldn't find the right places to put dialog in for them, so it was mostly Cheerilee talking. I finally found their voice in chapter 5 of all things. That was when I was the most comfortable writing for them. On the plus
CHEERILEE: "Don't get me wrong, I do love my students, but it's so hard finding ways to dispose of the overblown gifts they sometimes give me. I mean, what am I supposed to do, keep that thing in my tiny house? Not happening. Hey, don't judge me, at least I keep their gifts long enough for them to forget before I dispose of them."
APPLE BLOOM: "...Do you reckon this is an accurate depiction of how these episodes are written on a weekly basis?"
SCOOTALOO: "I don't know about that, but this certainly feel like an accurate depiction of how the cold opens for these reviews are done!"
Sweetie Belle gains a soul —By Bad Dragon
Chapter 12:
“You are a medical pony, are you not?” Twilight faced her. “You should know that horns don't grow back if they break.”
*Sinster villain laugh intensifies*
“Na-a!” Rainbow Dash’s wings erected up from within the crowd. “One awesome prank doesn’t make her a master yet.” She folded both wings so they fitted through the door.
Now it happened. After a week delay due to health issues, the second chapter of "The Strange Case of Dinky Hooves' Cutie Mark Curiosity" is finally released and the fic is back on track!
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/299751/the-strange-case-of-dinky-hooves-cutie-mark-curiosity
And with this chapter, the first day of helping ponies with their cutie marks dawns for Applebloom, Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle! There is not much else to say about this chapter, so, go and read it while it's hot!
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