Reading Reaction #1 Part 5 · 12:38am Feb 21st, 2022
Sweetie Belle gains a soul —By Bad Dragon
Chapter 12:
“You are a medical pony, are you not?” Twilight faced her. “You should know that horns don't grow back if they break.”
*Sinster villain laugh intensifies*
“Na-a!” Rainbow Dash’s wings erected up from within the crowd. “One awesome prank doesn’t make her a master yet.” She folded both wings so they fitted through the door.
Rainbow Dash is saying that the zombie prank ain’t shit compared to her pranks. 
They probably just taunted me to bring me down. Twilight Sparkle, the snitch, must have told them that I sucked at magic. They likely just wanted to use my weakness to punish me for coming home late. I hoped they would stop teasing me if I called them out on it. “My magic went from decent to zero.”
So the corruption/villain arc begins….
Food! I clenched at it with all four hooves, making it my own. The muzzle plunged inside as if by itself, teeth gnawing at defenseless cabbage leaves. Rolling to my side, I turned my back to dad and mom. I held the bowl tightly and chewed on the insides. So hungry!
Frick! Who let venom in the my little pony universe?
First he fixes his host deformity and then he begins to consume all food.
Chapter 13:
“This hothead brought a lighter to our clubhouse.”
Pyro Scootaloo confirmed??
“It's an adventure song!” I proclaimed when I looked up at them from the song I apparently wrote.
Holy balls that is an…..
…..interesting song Sweetie!!!
On a serious note I like how quickly you are doing the whole corruption/possession thing and the fact that unlike movies or tv shows this is an evil being possessing a child. Wanting to take them over with its malice and bloodlust for revenge.
So that’s cool 😎
Chapter 14:
My body froze when Diamond Tiara’s head joined me under the table. “And don’t worry if your cutie mark comes off. We’ll draw a new one on you tomorrow.”
Dang everyone in you’re in the story is a sociopath which I dig the vibe but it’s also pretty messed up.
Something inside me just wanted to snap and burst out. I felt as if I was losing myself; drifting away. The stable world I lived in thus far cracked. I was no longer connected to the surrounding world. The room was distorted, distant and grand. Tables and chairs towered above me like giants. I was no longer seeing them as the tools that made my life easier. Authority radiated from them and everything else around me. I felt as if I was becoming smaller. My mind was filling up with—something.
Yes let it all out. Release me Naruto…..
….I mean Sweetie Belle. Let it all out let me rip hoof from hoof.
“I will,” I lied.
No need the cut will heap super quick if my theory is correct.
Chapter 15:
My mere existence felt like a chore. It would be so easy to let somepony else take over and deal with all the pressure. If only I could just hide away and let everything unfold without me. It was too heavy of a burden for me to carry, and I couldn’t even tell anypony about my troubles. I had talked too much already. That’s how it started to begin with. Me and my big mouth. Maybe I even deserved the hoof punishment.
Cue Luna’s favorite band playing loudly in Sweetie’s room at 3AM
Apple Bloom reached her first. She jumped into the fetlock-high water and raised the muddy head above the surface. Scootaloo gargled while gasping for air. Rapid coughs followed in quick succession.
Dang she really is a chicken she can’t fly or swim.
These were some great chapter and I can’t wait for Sweetie/The entity as I’m calling him to take their revenge and begin to punish the malcontents.
The corruption is coming along nicely after all!
You're really cheering for the evil Sweetie Belle, aren't you?
Remember what the zebra said!
I've never thought about Venom in relationship to Sweetie Belle. But now that you mentioned it, there sure are some similarities.
Fire is cool. Ergo, Pyro
ChickenScootaloo must be cool as well, right?I'm glad you liked the song. It's not really an adventure song, just like the story isn't adventure per se. I'm also glad you didn't click on any of the links. That would have been embarrassing.
You're not the first to point out that everyone in the story is a sociopath. It's funny because I hadn't even noticed while I was writing the story. I may have just been slowly corrupted.
I find it funny that a mere going to the lake crusade turned almost fatal for CMC. I'm not sure if you could safely leave them in a padded room. Especially if Scootaloo brought her lighter...
Another thing about the lake,
It's a good thing that nothing bad happened to Sweetie Belle.
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I dunno why I just love evil characters and corruption stories so I just wanna enjoy it while it lasts.
Venom and Sweetie really do have some similarities.
You’re corruption arc began when you wrote the story…..
….but where does it end…..
No where is safe when the Crusaders are around!
P.S. I did click those links……..
5637981 All I ever wanted was to write about sunshine and rainbows, but every one of my stories got corrupted with evil in the process.
These are funny.