Winner · 12:23am Oct 27th, 2016
Okay. Voting for my next story over. And the winner is:
'A Dragon's Nature'
Yes, with 32 votes, 'A Dragon's Nature' won.
The one with the second most votes was, 'Just a scepter, right?' with 22 votes.
Then, 'The Great and Controlled Trixie', with 13 votes
'The Bracelet' with 12
And lastly, 'Timberwolf', with 8 votes.
And, I am not going to be writing 'A Dragon's Nature' exactly how I said I would. There is just no way I can get Sweetie in character with my original idea.
I originally said
Rarity and Spike have been dating for some time, and have had more than a few instances where they would make love. Though, because of his Dragon Nature, if he gets too greedy, even during sex, he looses control, and goes off of instance. As Rarity brags, it makes for the best sex in the world. Well, Sweetie has had enough of the bragging, and during one of her heat cycles, she can't take it anymore. She plans to dim the lights and act as she's Rarity, dressed up like her, a wig, and her cutie mark covered, as she tries to push Spike over the edge. If he looses himself to instinct, he shouldn't notice it being Sweetie at all. All she has to do is make Spike too greedy and lose himself to his true dragon nature, going crazy and fucking what he thinks is his wife full force.
But, making it in character, and with the same general idea, it's more going to end up like,
Rarity and Spike have been married for some time. One of Rarity's favorite parts about him, as uncouth as it might seem, is his Dragon Nature. When Spike gets too greedy, only really happening when they make love, he 'greeds out' and grows slightly while running mostly on instincts, and although he's not nearly as smart in this state, it makes for some great nights. Especially in times, like right now, when Rarity is in heat. Though, her sister, Sweetie Belle, also happens to be in heat right now, and just can't find release. In her more pent up state, she can't help but please herself as Spike greeds out and rams her sister. Rarity passes out as Spike leaves the room to try to calm down. But, in his more instinct-driven and less intelligent state, he catches Sweetie Belle and mistakes her for Rarity. I mean, they look pretty similar at this point besides their manes and cutie mark. Will Sweetie resit the temptation to finally get release? No. She won't. You do realize this is a clopshot, right?
I'm sorry if the change is not what you wanted, but there is no possible way I can think of to make Sweetie in character in the first one. She is usually so sweet and such, so planning that whole thing is just un-doable. Though, her in a lustful and pent-up stage as someone she just watched roughly fuck her sister in heat sees her as who he's married to. I mean, being really horny and it happening so fast and not planned out at all makes it a lot easier to keep it in character.
And, I don't know if two days to vote, and voting on only one, was good enough and whatnot since that was my first poll. So, I'm going to make another poll, and have you pick two or three ideas, and leave that up to vote until I'm finished with 'A Dragon's Nature', to see how that works and whatnot, so that should be my next blog post.
I should get started writing 'A Dragon's Nature' sometime tomorrow, I have the general outline and description thought of.
This story will be completely written by me, and noone will see it unless I get an editor or someone to proofread it after I'm finished writing it.
I honestly don't mind the change, and it seems to fit a little better than the first one does. But it does remind me of a comic someone did on tumblr, granted there are no similarities other than the sex and Sweetie being aged up.