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TPantyhose Warrior
Equestria Girls
Dark
Comedy
Drama
Wallflower Blush finds herself in a tight spot.
Fetish
Human
Sunset Shimmer
Wallflower Blush
Bad Dragon · 6k words · 13 27 · 457 views
TBad Dragon's Short Stories
MLP: FiM
Anthology
Got a minute? It will take you even less to read one of these unrelated short stories designed for instant reader’s gratification.
Spike
Bad Dragon · 10k words · 34 39 · 1k views
TZipp Wears a Furtight Bodysuit
MLP Gen 5
Romance
Drama
Zipp is forced to wear itchy, uncomfortable, clingy, entrapping, dumb fabric.
Second Person
Sunny Starscout
Zipp
Bad Dragon · 2k words · 40 16 · 1.1k views
ETrixie's Flares
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
As a fan of Trixie's performances, you decide after her latest show to greet her personally and tell her what you think. In her little wagon, far away from other ponies, you and Trixie... connect.
Human
Second Person
Trixie
BradyBunch · 1k words · 128 8 · 5.5k views
TThe Thousand Changeling Warriors
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Drama
Tragedy
Thorax has defected to the land of Equestria, taking thousands of changelings with him. When Chrysalis launches a retaliation against Equestria, Twilight and her friends must repel her invasion with one thousand changeling volunteers.
Death
Violence
Twilight
Shining Armor
Main 6
Chrysalis
Changelings
BradyBunch · 15k words · 28 6 · 873 views
TDisplaced, But Nothing Goes Right
MLP: FiM
Comedy
A Displaced story, but every cliche and step of the way goes wrong, and most of the time I die.
Death
OC
Nightmare Moon
Main 6
BradyBunch · 6.3k words · 45 23 · 1.6k views
EThe Creation of My Little Pony
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Sci-Fi
On a dark and stormy night, a fiendish scientist unveils the most terrifying invention to be unleashed upon the innocent world: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.
Human
Other
Main 6
BradyBunch · 2.6k words · 57 6 · 1.3k views
ETWILIGHT!!!
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Random
Twilight goes into paralyzing shock after the question is asked.
Twilight
OC
BradyBunch · 1.4k words · 86 24 · 2.5k views
EHow The Pony Of Vengeance Should Have Ended
MLP: FiM
Batman
Dark
Comedy
Random
What if The Pony of Vengeance turned out very, very differently?
Celestia
OC
Main 6
Griffons
BradyBunch · 1.8k words · 23 5 · 1.4k views
TSundered Universes
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Drama
Following the events of Fires of Friendship and Ice of Hatred, Midnight Sparkle has escaped to another universe entirely, Burning Star's allies Quickfire and Hiller are sent to capture her, and have to team up with group of elite ponies for help!
Gore
Violence
Crossover
Alt. Universe
OC
Shining Armor
Main 6
Midnight Sparkle
Pony of Shadows
Super Ponyman · 148k words · 11 0 · 964 views
TThe Pony Of Vengeance
MLP: FiM
Dark
Horror
Sad
A mysterious figure, living in shadows, is attacking seemingly random crime leaders and leaving little to no trace. The Mane Six investigate, but they find a secret more startling than what they had ever imagined.
Gore
Violence
Death
OC
Main 6
Griffons
BradyBunch · 130k words · 129 12 · 3.8k views
TA Rather Large Adventure
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
Comedy
The Mane Six are joined by three others in a quest to use the Elements of Harmony one last time, as a brewing war between Tartarus and the free creatures of the world threatens to destroy Equestria forever.
Gore
Violence
Death
Alt. Universe
Celestia
OC
Main 6
Starlight Glimmer
Tempest Shadow
BradyBunch · 633k words · 120 21 · 3.4k views
EMy Little Sunset: Magical Girl
MLP: FiM
Equestria Girls
Life is Strange
Adventure
Slice of Life
The changlings have taken over and all hope is long as none is left to stand against them. But in another world there is still one unicorn left. With the help of her old teacher's pet, Sunset must become the hero she always meant to be.
Human
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Chrysalis
Sunset Shimmer
Principal Celestia
Vice-Principal Luna
Main 7 (EqG)
madhat886 · 48k words · 107 36 · 6k views
EMy Little Naruto: Family Is Magic
Equestria Girls
Naruto
Slice of Life
The Apples were a normal farming family living in Ponyvile. Up till a young boy name Naruto suddenly appeared out of nowhere. Now in a world without ninjas or a need for them.
Crossover
Human
Alt. Universe
Other
Sunset Shimmer
Main 7 (EqG)
madhat886 · 59k words · 121 55 · 6.1k views
T𝐻𝑒𝓁𝓁𝑜 𝒪𝓁𝒹 𝐹𝓇𝒾𝑒𝓃𝒹...
MLP: FiM
Romance
Dark
Drama
Sad
A Friend is a hard thing to find, it's an Even Harder to Lose....... and Luna is that Friend,
Luna
Chrysalis
Alyssa Hartwick · 5.6k words · 29 5 · 1.5k views
TA Never Ending Dream
MLP: FiM
Dark
Horror
Mystery
Sad
Thriller
Tragedy
Luna cant wake up from this Dream, or is it a Night-mare?
Gore
Luna
Alyssa Hartwick · 1.2k words · 463 views
TThe Rabbits Paw
MLP: FiM
Dark
Drama
Horror
Thriller
Tragedy
During a Massive Storm the Apple Family recive an unexpected guest, but before they leave, they ask for help with destroying an Innocent object along with a Warning. "Do Not Tempt Fate"
Gore
Alt. Universe
Applejack
Apple Bloom
Big Mac
Granny Smith
Other
Alyssa Hartwick · 1.1k words · 619 views
EThe Magical Quest Starring Mickey Mouse: The Equestrian Adventure
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Comedy
All Mickey had ever known was his own home. And for years, peace and prosperity had reigned. However, unknown to him, there is another magical kingdom in need of a hero.
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Spike
OC
Main 6
wingdingaling · 426k words · 77 14 · 3.9k views
EPaper Mario: Brotherhood is Harmony
MLP: FiM
Mario
Adventure
Comedy
Mario and co. are ready for a relaxing vacation with Peach's royal friends in Equestria. Little do they know that something so innocent will inevitable lead to their next big adventure.
Human
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Spike
Celestia
Luna
Main 6
CMCs
wingdingaling · 40k words · 52 8 · 3k views
TA Flurry of Darkness
MLP: FiM
Romance
Dark
Drama
Sad
Flurry Heart has allways felt ...alone. Sure she had "friends"...but the only reason they hung out with her was beacuse as fate would have it she was a princess. Except for her one true freind, "Mr. Shade". For Nothing Goes better than Cold and Dark.
Alt. Universe
Other
Cadance
Shining Armor
King Sombra
Alyssa Hartwick · 6.3k words · 66 5 · 2.1k views
TTesting the Limits/ Anon Overload
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Random
A duo of short stories following the prompt, "In Over Your Head". Testing the Limits: Rainbow Dash gets creative with her Wonderbolts exam. Anon Overload: when Anon steps through the portal to Equestria, he discovers he wasn't the first.
Second Person
Human
Rainbow Dash
Applejack
Other
Wonderbolts
NightLord · 1.2k words · 381 views
EGems
MLP: FiM
Dark
Comedy
Drama
Slice of Life
Created from gems by an evil being, six chaotic creatures suddenly find themselves under the watchful eyes of the Mane Six as they discover that they may very well have a choice between following their evil purpose, or becoming something better.
Alt. Universe
OC
Other
Main 6
CMCs
Starlight Glimmer
Moheart7 · 50k words · 28 6 · 1.3k views
EA Gizmonk in Ponyville
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Slice of Life
When Apple Bloom discovers a strange creature injured in the Everfree Forest, it isn't long before the Apple Family have a new house-guest in the form of a Gizmonk named Goggles
Alt. Universe
Applejack
Trixie
Silver Spoon
OC
CMCs
Moheart7 · 154k words · 52 5 · 1.8k views
TPirates of the Alicorn
MLP: FiM
Romance
Dark
Adventure
Comedy
When a pirate named Captain Jack Silver steals the Elements of Harmony, it's up to Twilight and the rest of the Mane Six to get them back. Soon enough they all find themselves on a swashbuckling adventure to find the SEVENTH Element of Harmony.
Gore
OC
Other
Main 6
CMCs
Moheart7 · 89k words · 151 11 · 4.9k views

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