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Super Ponyman


Just your average everyday human, writing to make himself happy! So, come with me as we follow the Adventures of Burning Star and his allies in Burning Star Saga!

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"I can say without a doubt that there are an infinite number of universes. Some are exactly like our own, except for one or two events... exactly the same.

But it's those events that make the most difference."

Prince Eclipsio Alicornus, "On the subject of Multiple Universes"

Hello everyone! This is Super Ponyman, and this is a crossover story of my universe with the universe of the author BradyBunch22 (go check him out he's pretty cool)

Anyways, this is a follow-Up to the Fires of Friendship and Ice of Hatred written by Super Ponyman,

and a prequel to A Rather Large Adventure, by BradyBunch22.

Both links are below, make sure to read these first.

Fires of Friendship and Ice of Hatred

A Rather Large Adventure

In the Last chapter of Fires of Friendship and Ice of Hatred, Midnight Sparkle escaped via a wormhole to another universe, intending to wreak havoc on the unsuspecting ponies there.

Quickfire and Hiller, two of Burning Star's Allies, go to hunt her down and finally put a stop to her destruction.

They don't have to do it alone... they soon meet up with another group of warriors, who are just as determined to hunt her down. This group is the Guardians of the Sun, Celestia's Secret Task Force assigned to deal with threats of great risk.

Two Worlds collide in an epic that is too small for one universe, so we have two to compensate for that clash!

Chapters (24)
Comments ( 29 )

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

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Burning Star would sound gruff and blunt.

Noble Blade would probably be British

Firestorm would probably be voiced in a sarcastic tone.

Hiller is ghetto, so imagine what he would be voiced like.

Quickfire is Shining Armor From the Future. His voice is deeper and more gasp like.

Freedom Fighter is mute, so we are not talking about that.

You based the name of this chapter off of Attack on Titan didn’t you?

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You're damn right I did! Ahahahaha!

...anyways what do you think so far?

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Keep reading, plz?

Anyways, what do you think of my portrayal of Midnight Sparkle?

If you have read some of my previous work then you should read that first to get a bit of world building.

Best chapter yet. Hands down. Your writing skills have improved, and, while not perfect, they're still phenomenally better than before. That final battle was still a really good work you did. It was intense, I could understand what was happening...pure awesomeness.

Although I still don't get why you need to shout the name of your attacks before you do them...

Ooh! I know! Marketing!

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I actually consulted with my editor on it after we went to go see Avengers: Infinity War.

Corruption is always enjoyable.
So is insanity.
I dreamed that I murdered three people last night.

Didn't expect this song to show up in here.:rainbowderp:
Not that I'm complaining.:pinkiecrazy:

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I always want to put Boss battle music in during fight scenes, gives the event some atmosphere.

I understood those references... Great job with the powerful entities. I know that the anime you watch can influence your writing, and I dunno what it is, but it seems good enough to warrant investigation. Great job.

You gotta correct those inconsistent italics and colored words in the beginning, though. And the commas everywhere the periods should be make the action confusing.

Awwwww...this was touching! A great send-off!

Is Matthew gonna face some crisis in the Equestria Girls universe next? I feel like the Matthew here is the physical description of yourself. It's a good thing you didn't put your age, last name, or your social security number in your description of Mr. Matt.

Finally, he mildly asked, “Did I miss something?"

Yeah you missed a lot.

Blueblood heard the mention of his last name and interrupted, "Hold on a moment. Why is this demon's last name the same as mine?"

Lucifer sensed a chance to fulfill a moment he always wanted to do, he spoke in a chilling voice, "Because Blueblood, I AM your father..."

Prince Blueblood somehow went whiter than he was, and stood back in shock and said, "No... that's not True... THATS IMPOSSIBLE!"

The devil Alicorn stepped forward and said, "Search your feelings, you know it to be true!"

Blueblood dropped to his knees and cried out, "NOOOOO! NOOOOOOOOO!"

Celestia gave the demon a raised eyebrow, causing Lucifer to smile and say, "What? I've always wanted to do that, can't I live my favorite movie moment?"

Radar has picked up multiple helicopters going soi soi soi, I know where that came from.

Comment posted by OlDreaddy deleted Feb 14th, 2019

I had a feeling that Burning Star was Sombra's son... Burning Star's not an edge lord you said... Not as edgy as my OC by any means.

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Oh, what gave it away? Other than the obvious?

I kink of feel sorry for Flash... Midnight is going to rape him.

The shitstorm of death has started.

"For we, are the proud mares and mighty stallions from across these Sundered Universes" Role credits.

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