This was my first fan-fic. I've now moved on to my second one, as this one is finished, but I won't upload the second story until I have permission from an artist to use his picture.
Any feedback, especially constructive criticism, is appreciated, so go ahead and tell me what you think!
Also, please give me any opinion of the sad ending. I'm expecting bad reviews, because I actually didn't want to write it. I wrote a happy ending, and the only reason I wrote the sad ending was to keep everypony happy.
Thanks in advance for the feedback!
Total Words: 505,030
Estimated Reading: 1 day
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This story is a sequel to A Silent Film
If you were to ask Vintage Cinema, a writer of true mystery books, Applewood has a long history of darkness underneath the glitz and glamor. His attention has turned to the Equestrian Society for Film Preservation in hopes of finding a film that is linked to his ancestor who disappeared during the silent film era. While his hunch does pay off, he finds that the film he has been looking for might have more than one mystery wrapped in its film reel.
A huge thank you to Lotus Moon and her cast for bringing this story to life.
Pinkie Pie is dead. Now, everypony, including Pinkie, must figure out who killed her.
Parody of Heavy is Dead.
This story is a sequel to Promises
Scootaloo's settling in to life with Rainbow Dash. It's smooth sailing from here right?
Once again this story wouldn't be possible without the pre-reading and editing efforts of:
juter4397, The Patriot, eggynack
So if you like this, go give them a thumbs up.
You probably don't need to read Promises to understand what's going on, but it would be useful.
Featured on day 1, thanks guys.
Flurry Heart has a fight with her mother on her being an alicorn princess.
This story is a sequel to I'm So Sorry
When Fluttershy let Scootaloo back into her life, she knew how many questions she'd have for her, and now, after all this time she's ready to answer them.
Thanks to Sagittare for the editing. ^^
Indigo Blossom, a young filly in Ponyville has been struggling with school, bullies, and life for the past few months. How much does it take to put someone over the edge? What does it take? How far does someone need to be pushed to be taken over the edge?
Reviews:
Joyous Apple: "I just read the last two paragraphs, and... oh my gosh the feels..."
1998alberto: "Wow, that was good. Like really good."
Dragonborne Fox : "I am entirely moved by this tale.
Excuse me while I go and purge out my tears from my eyes.
Well done."
Me: "ACK! I'm gone for two minutes, I come back, and everyone is crying."
Thank you to Dragonborne Fox for making the AMAZING new cover art. They also made the original cover art.
A short one-shot that I did just to test my abilities as a writer at writing something sad. Let me know what you thought I did good at/ what you thought could be improved. I wasn't about to go and write fanon about canon ponies. Also, this is not my OC, and this is not in anyway a self-insert.
Disclaimer: The topics discussed in this story are very serious. If you are experiencing any of these problems seek out a group that can help you deal with these problems. There are several here on FimFiction, as well as countless others across the web. The views expressed in this work in no way reflect the views of Golden Skies or his editors, nor do they support or commend any of the action of the characters in this story. Remember, that life always gets better.
On a dark night filled with even darker magics, an insane cult attempts to give Nightmare Moon a body and life of her own, utterly separate from Princess Luna. But, when the spell is interrupted by Celestia, something unexpected is created.
Now, a little black alicorn filly named Nyx finds herself living under the care of Twilight Sparkle, only to be haunted by memories and emotions from her past. Is she Nightmare Moon reborn or is she simply a doppelganger with a soul and mind of her own? Can Twilight Sparkle protect Nyx from those who refuse to see past her dragon eyes and black coat?
Or, will Nyx be forced to inherit the sins that may not even be hers and become the greatest evil Equestria has ever known?
After trying to find a peaceful solution to the fruit bat infestation for Applejack's apple orchard, Fluttershy enlists the help of Twilight to conjure a spell. However, the spell backfired and the desire of the fruit bats that makes them crave nothing but the sweet juicy nectar of apples leached onto Fluttershy's being, transforming her into Flutterbat.
This is a first-person view into the world through the eyes of Flutterbat at the world that is trying to cope with her loss. Specifically, Flutterbat still possesses traces of the kindness of her former self, and she sees it as her duty to check in on her mourning friends to see how they are dealing with their grief. What she sees is rather distressing.