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Well it has been nine years since the first portal (or bridge as some call it) to Equestria opened due to some type of spell mishap on their side. I have lived here quitely in this mystical land for four years. I guess an adventure changes that. A friend of mine has. . . . left our humble town without a word. I in good conscious can not just sit here and do nothing. With the help of Gilda (a griffin I bribed with fish) we set out on my first adventure to find my friend.

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You have something that might intrigue readers here, but there a number of grammar and spelling mistakes that will tun off many readers.

For example:

why they do that I don't know but at lest it is in good fun.

shoud be:

Why they do that, I don't know, but at least it is in good fun.

2733630 thanks for the tip. One correction made, many more to go. :fluttershysad:

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