Well it has been nine years since the first portal (or bridge as some call it) to Equestria opened due to some type of spell mishap on their side. I have lived here quitely in this mystical land for four years. I guess an adventure changes that. A friend of mine has. . . . left our humble town without a word. I in good conscious can not just sit here and do nothing. With the help of Gilda (a griffin I bribed with fish) we set out on my first adventure to find my friend.
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2733630 thanks for the tip. One correction made, many more to go.