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after the events of portal 2 (as usual) and season 3 of mlp the mane six, spike and king Sombra all end up in Aperture laboratories but at the same time Optimus prime and Megatron discover the enrichment center and are put through a series of tests... this can't end well, but it's gonna be hilarious!
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I'm sorry, but that was... REALLY Bad. With a capital B. It was that bad.
I like your Tragedy and Comedy tags and how you put them together.
2447048 well I made a pretty big mistake that was my first draft and i barely did any editing
and keep in mind this is only the first chapter
2453818 well we haven't actuality gotten to the actual tragedy yet
2481507 I think his point is that those are conflicting tags and stories with both are usually turned down. This clearly slipped a few radars.
And skimming the first chapter, I already know your author's note is lying about my not needing to read your other stories to understand what's happening. Also...
You're familiar with the term "redundancy," right? I took from the end because I'm terrified to scroll back up and look at what you did to the Transformers: Prime cast.
2482299 ok hahaha look basically all that happened before this was that the transformers crashed on equestria and there was a big fight that included Discord and in the end he was turned back into stone and Celestia sent the Cybertronians back to earth through an inter-dimensional portal wich are located in the canterlot gardens in the form of arch's and so far I haven't done anything with the prime cast except send them towards Aperture
2482390 Well, the fact that you needed to come into the comments to explain that doesn't bode well for the story itself.
2482397 well... um I'm sorry about that but now that you know it please read the actual storry and tell me what you think
2482416 Well... fine. I'll try to. Just remember that you asked for it.
2482449 and frankly with the whole Tragedy and comedy canceling each other out is wrong, as GLaDOS herself says, "you know the old formula; comedy=tragedy+time
2486331 GLaDOS ALSO callously murdered the entire staff of Aperture Laboratories and strung Chell along throughout the entirety of the first game. Not someone whose words you can take at face value.
2486409 well if it works as a defence against you're ridiculous comment's I'll GLaDly take her advice
2486556 "Ridiculous?" I'm just talking about conflicting tags. Tags that the higher-ups say conflict. You think it's ridiculous, take it up with the mods.
Just be happy it wasn't SAD and Tragedy. The fic would NEVER make it then, especially if Wanderer D was the one it got through.
2486603 ok ok but when we get to the last chapters youll see why its a tragedy
This fic is in desperate need of capitalization.
i think this is pretty good,continue it.
you should continue this
2511879 THANK YOU finally some complements!
2511734 ya my grammar isn't the best
no prob
2516652 I'm gonna make a sequal in fact
awesome
moustache
sorry that meant to say dr,nafario but it wouldn't let me correct it
2537130 well I do use word thank you very much but I can't see better ways to correct it, IDK maybe I'll send it to my dad and ask him to edit it on the next chapter
2541739 I know I'm not pissed off or anything but sometimes when I correct it, it makes even less sense!
2541876 what ever my dad says to ignore it when it tries to correct character dialog and if any supposed mistakes are when applejack's talking I did it on purpose to exaggerate her accent
i just read the new chapter and thanks for the dedication
just to note unusablechaos im at school when i get on to read so i might not reply right away
2546995 well obviously but as far as I know it was
nice job
I haven't even started reading and the grammar in the title is making me cry
2557236 what?!
2569054
Simple. Grammar Nazis FTW!
2571504
2571615
Is it annoying you that I actually care about the English language and how it is supposed to be written out? Oh I'm sorry. Do by any chance speak Internet?
I am kidding.
Go check out my story and see if you find anything worth noting there.
2571621 well excuse me for my ignorance fwi I'M FLIPPING 14 and I'm doing the bucking best I can!
2571679
I never really meant to piss you off, I'm just giving some pointers. My routing use of sarcasm doesn't really help me though. Just, go where the ideas take you. Imma go buck off now
2571685 ok I sorry i flipped out but I'm kinda getting sick of annoying comments thank you for the pointers I attempt to do the best I can and just so you know this is one of my better ones yoiu want to read a terrible one read "discords new plot" my first one
2571679
They taught capitalization in kindergarten. Hell, foreign languages also teach capitalization. You have no excuse to be doing this bad.
Woah, Stand back people, Science in the making
Also, twinkies
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3098453
okay my capitalization is not the greatest, but I always add it on all the names and the truth is, I'm a bit lazy... all I can say to you is deal with it, you guys should be judging the story itself not the punctuation
eh, pretty good chapter
3752510
thanks!
3766983 No problem