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the adventures of Windspark and Starcatcher

if you like my little pony and Sherlock Holmes you will love the adventures of Windspark and Starcatcher as they solve Sherlock Holmes style mysteries and face down the unrevealed villain Blackmirror

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Neon Czolgosz

Neon Czolgosz #1 · Apr 9th, 2013 · 1 · ·

How are you industrious enough to write 4400 words of ponyfic, yet so lazy you won't even use punctuation in your freakin' title and story description?

PropdowPony

PropdowPony #2 · Apr 10th, 2013 · · ·

This really would be easier to read if you formatted the text into paragraphs. And some of your dialogue exchanges go on way too long without descriptions or attributions; it's easy to lose track of who's saying what.

It almost looks like you'd rather write a play or screenplay than fiction.

unusablechaos