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Yoater
Still here and back with new ideas. Writes slowly.
Yoater
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very interesting, its rare to see a story about an alicorn in FoE
though i do wonder if she will drop the we habit
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She most likely will eventually, but it will be hard for her to do so.
I found this concept rather intriguing, not to mention a rare sight to see a story running a long side one of the Goddess's children. It seems decent, biggest suggestion is to be more descriptive of where the characters are. I am having to imagine their surroundings more than I should.
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Though she does give a brief description of why she doesn't in ch1.
I'll be honest, I had forgotten they could read minds until I had a lot written.
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Thanks. I've been attempting to be more descriptive in the newer chapters.
Um... Teen Gore? How is this possible?
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Sorry if I confused you, it's just hard to me to imagine teen and gore categories side by side, that's all.
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Well the Pipbuck does recognize her as an alicorn, but it doesn't recognize that radiation is actually good for her. At least that is my take on Pipbucks & Unity alicorns. It's only acting how its original programming tells it to, which is thinking that she is normal and hurt by radiation.
It'd be nice to hear people's opinions on if it's gotten better or worse as far as her describing the areas and stuff. Also how are the other characters? Well the ones that aren't knocked out for most of a chapter or two.
Oh and how is the pacing?
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I don't think that drawing would work as cover art. I had an image in my head, but getting it down is going to suck.
Perhaps Bane for the name of the chainsaw? I dunno.
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I'll see about improving that aspect of her story telling, since she's going to be keeping that blade for a while.
i love that chapter ending. spooky.
keep up the good work dude!
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Then it worked as intended.
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She does whatever it takes to complete an objective and sometimes goes a little overboard.
I'm kind of afraid of what might happen when she finally meets Eclipse. 
lol.
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I'm re-doing the next chapter as I didn't like my idea that the machine at the end of seven was also a time machine. Because Shell Shock in pre-war times is a recipe for disaster for any pony she comes in contact with. That and after writing it out it felt like an odd thing to do.
With all the crap that goes at least a mile under the city, and outlying jungle, I think the ponies that built Oakwood were funded by an insane billionaire pony.
If anyone is wondering, I went back and redid the prologue. Well more like fixed the sentence structure and other glaring errors.
I'm going to eventually get around to fixing the first four. I decided to capitalize the 'We, Us and Our' for when she's talking about just herself. That way it doesn't get confusing later on with companions.
hey is filly eclipse and loco in the coco steel ranger eclipse the same pony like after the war lilium bell(aka.shellshock) had a kid before she joined unity that's way she hates alicorn's because she believes that thay took her mother's mother's mother away from her or something.
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That is a possibility that crossed my mind at one point, but to tell would be spoilers. In fact the next chapter might sort it out a bit better. Or so I hope.
Sienna is so daaawwww? even if she is a ghoul she and shell shock are going mess with everyone like I will eat yo brains grr arrr growl "adorable sqeak" aww mother daughter bonding time sooooo sweet with panks and scaring the crap out of people who wont shoot you "maybe".
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Much scaring of the Oakwood locals was indeed planned.
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Don't worry. She's not going to suddenly wake up for a second time in pre-war Equestira.
So she wasn't forcefully transformed into an Alicorn? Weird. Though at least Sienna is alive albeit a ghoul but still alive.
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Dont be jerking us around. You know you want to do that again, total mind f*ck us.
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Fine... I'll get on it. I have the backround, just taking sweet time to make the character art to overlay. But hey, since people want, I'll be sure to get back to it and work my brains out trying to get it just right.
Ah I see what you did there
the spore carriers from New Vegas, good chapter again though 
Dog for the win
NOOO she cant Die ITS NOT FAIR
may Mudpie rest in peace, an enjoyable story and I hope Shock doesn't slip away
huh not bad really good
go on.
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I plan to keep it going until the end.
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I'm sure she will rest in peace.
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My long delayed cover art for you... but hey, atleast you now can say you got fan art! Along with this:
http://fav.me/d6ww4c3
I'm also pre-reading/minor proof reading guys, and I can tell you, its going pretty good. Worth the delay. He is also working on other stuff too though, so really hang in there, show the love, and make some fan-art even. Let him know he isnt as bad as he likes to think he is.
drunk shock is best shock
ANOTHER!
I think I missed the cannibalism part...
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Shock tries to keep it buried by saying she'd never do it, but it keeps popping up here and there throughout most of the chapters and quickly forgotten about.
I'll be honest, I don't know how to feel about this.
its over?
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What if I told you guys I was planning on writing a sequel set in Baltimare, which picks up not long after this ends?
4585059 I would tell you to continue with this plan
4585740 The one where I replied to the wrong person.
4585059 I say you have my curiosity.
I don't think she'll do it.
No. No, no, no, no, no. Suppressors do not work on revolvers. You can attach one, but it will be pretty useless because there is a gap between the barrel and the cylinder holding the rounds.
I know it sounds cool, but it does not work. At all. Anybody with knowledge of guns can tell you the same thing.
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Aye. I learned that fact a couple months after I finished the story.
It's strange to see airplanes, usually they would use sky carriages or simply pegasi, won't they?
5743646 Well, there is the Nagant M1895, so it's not impossible, just unusual for a revolver to be suppressed.
I'm really liking the interactions between Shock and Sister, hope to see Grumpy back so we can have the full trio.
I guess the biggest question is why Rose don't fly or even show her wings? Crippled pegasus?
And even more expectation to see the BFG shooting XD
2511965 This part reminds me of Pink eyes, with Puppy's suit always saying she is dead XD
I still don't like Vertibucks in this cannon, they don't work well with the rest of the enclave tech.
A wasteland heroine that don't like mares? Heresy!
For a moment I tought that this island was some kind of purgatory and everyone there was dead.