• Member Since 19th May, 2012
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Perfect Prime


Saw a lot of FanFics on EQD, so I decided to make an account for reading them. Got my exams in a few days though, so I probably won't do much for a few days. Can anyone actually see this?

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It's been a long time since I've submitted a story, and now I find it astonishingly difficult to write anything :derpytongue2:

This was something I wrote a little over a month ago and I only just got around to editing it today (damn exams). It seems to be similar in style to some of my earlier stories, but significantly shorter. This, for me, was more of a re-introduction to writing.

Enough about me, I hope you enjoyed the story and if there are any problems/suggestions/anything then let me know.

I have to say, the hardest part was choosing the tag for this story...

2420440 Oh ha there! I hope you're doing quite well today. :twilightsmile:

Wise, gentle, short, smart, and a look at life how people really perceive it. True, maybe Rarity might be good at other things, it shines the light of Twilight how she wanted to follow her destiny; live in a library, and become the ultimate scholar, but then, life showed her something else, and she found out that life was somehow generous. Be generous for what you have, and live an un-regretful life? Your writing is quite smooth, not to hard, nor to easy, just about perfect, to be exact. Again, I loved the concept, and how you wrote it.

Tata, take care, be safe, and have fun! Ciao! ^_^x

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