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Perfect Prime


Saw a lot of FanFics on EQD, so I decided to make an account for reading them. Got my exams in a few days though, so I probably won't do much for a few days. Can anyone actually see this?

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If one pony says someone else is a monster, does that make it true? If everypony says that the same thing, does that make them right? There is a lot more to everybody than what first meets the eye, and if you assume that there is nothing more to them, you might just end up hurting yourself. The tale of a creature long ago thought to have been a monster and rejected by society, now locked away in his own personal prison.
Rated teen for foul language and semi-mature themes.
Constructive criticism is appreciated.

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Comments ( 20 )

Just want to mention that I got bored today and typed this up in about five hours, so there might be a few mistakes, and if you could point them out, then I'll change it. Also, it might not be that good right now, so constructive criticism is very much welcome! :pinkiehappy: Lastly I get the feeling that this was inspired by someone else's work. I thought I saw it in a dream, but now I keep getting the feeling that it was either fan made music or a picture, so if you know where the inspiration might be from, please tell me and I'll give them some credit. :derpytongue2:

Daaang...

You've really made me want to see a Discord vs Celestia showdown where all his emotions and feelings come to light and no misunderstandings are between them... Now I really want to see a story where Discord actually turns out to be not such a bad guy and He in turn teams up with Twilight and co to try and clear his name or something.

An excellent one shot you wrote sir!

510847 Thank you so much!:pinkiehappy:

This was good, well done ! :coolphoto:

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further prove that little tia is a tyrant and lord discord should be ruler!

wow, I like the idea that Discord made the Changelings :pinkiehappy: and this definitely makes me see Discord in a whole new light... WAE MUST YOU DO DIS TO MEH!?!? :raritydespair: but seriously, really good story, even if it was long xD

514559 Sorry for making it long but I'm glad you liked it:pinkiehappy:

Really liked this. I too love the idea of Discord creating the Changelings and I see him in a completely different light now, just like Acoustic said. :rainbowlaugh:

Normally my way of browsing fimfiction is to close my eyes, click, accidentally read, a clopfic, wonder what I just read, and repeat.

I chose this story because of its name, and I do not regret it like I normally do.

I'm now going to go consider something. I have no idea anymore. :pinkiesad2:

519993 i think that means u like:pinkiehappy:d it and im glad.:pinkiehappy:

Wow... Just wow...

That is deep. Loved it, loved it, went to eat pizza then loved it some moar.:pinkiehappy:

Really, I can imagine a sequel-ish thing to this. But even but itself, it's great.

Nice work. :yay:

D'AWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

525139
Lol. You likes? :ajsmug:

525229 I'm glad! :pinkiehappy: I'm currently writing another fanfic and hope to be done by either saturday or wednesday. Stay tuned :raritywink: Got to go to bed now. It's midnight here, and I got a test tomorrow! :twilightblush:

:heart: your writings, my friend.
Good luck on your test :yay:
I'll be here
The person
With
No
Life...
:pinkiecrazy:

Aright a sequal where he gets free again and reveals the truth to the world that would be awseom if you had everyone rebel againts celestia :applejackconfused::pinkiehappy:

this was honestly really good... It made me cry, it made me laugh (which is sorta messed up :scootangel:) and it made me see everything from the point of view of Discord... I myself am working on a Discord x celestia story it's called The Equestrian Archives: The Draconian Curse i would be really honored if you were to check it out sometime :rainbowkiss:

513674 That's what I think whenever I read this kind of story.

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