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Tunalock


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Myrtenaster's life is turned on its head when she finds herself going from a singer in Mirror City to a warrior in its alternate universe — White Castle — once more. Armed with magical powers and her trusty rapier, she must find her way back out of the stronghold once more. She will face new challenges and numerous enemies, but will she be able to survive the encounter?

Based off of the character Weiss Schnee from RWBY, and is set after the White trailer.

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Comments ( 12 )
Oni

well, then. that was interesting.

2329912 And it gets interestinger.

Oni

2329919 this word, i dont think it means what you think it means.

Oni

2329931 :rainbowlaugh: anyways, keep up the good work. grammer and spelling were good except for one part in the beginning.

Oni

2329953 very first paragraph. :facehoof: :twilightsmile:

The apartment was much like the rest of the city: black shadows mixing in with the white color of the objects around the room to form irregular shapes. Along one of the walls were windows that lined it to let the occupant gaze out into the seemingly endless rows of building that housed the ponies who called Mirror City home. On the far left corner formed by the windows merging with the wall sat a queen-sized bed, an Earth pony as white as her surroundings resting on it. Myrtenaster had just recently finished a series of concerts at Mirror Hall — at which she sung spectacularly — and was giving herself a moment to relax. Her long, white mane was pulled back into a ponytail so it wouldn't get pulled when she moved around, and the musical notes on her flank seemed to slightly move as she slept. Over her left eye ran a mysterious scar, nopony but her knowing where it came from. Her peaceful moment would end, though, asa crash came from outside of the room. It startled Myrtenaster and woke her up from her rest, her light blue eyes darting every which way to find the source of the noise.

just one, and it was small. very impressive.

Nice to see a crossover with RWBY so soon. Carry on. :trixieshiftright:

Needs more Blake. :trixieshiftright:

That being said, I'm surprised there's so few RWBY fics (I can't be the only one who thinks Yang looks like a human Applejack and Blake looks like Octy...)

I'll put this in the read later list, when I'm bored I'll probably give it a read.

Myrtenaster's life is turned on its head when she finds herself going from a singer in Mirror City to a warrior in its alternate universe — White Castle — once more.

...sorry, what? This line makes no sense whatsoever. Myrtenaster is Weiss's rapier, not a character...

4209242 Well yeah, but it's not actually Weiss that is was in the story. It's more of a... representation.

Are you going to update this story?

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