Shining Armor finds Twilight's secret diary and he doesn't read it... for about 5 seconds.
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Well, at least Shining got some this chapter. Not from his sis and surely not the way he had imagined but it was good nonetheless. XD
Heh, genderbending. Good story progression and good sex this chapter. I'm also looking forward to the possible cadence/shining/luna threesome.
2729047 Well. This was strange to write, trying to keep the his, her pronouns straight.
For those of you getting antsy about the main plot line:
Twilight will play a prominent role in the next chapter.
Loved it! Looking forward to the next chapter!
OOHHHH! Female Shining, 10/10 would mount!
Those two just grew so much closer as a couple.
Been enjoying the story, and this was a fun chapter. I do wish you'd stop teasing us so hard with Luna's failed attempts at Shining! But hey, nice work.
A couple of words you should consider changing:
Predisposed means "to give an inclination or tendency to beforehand". You should use indisposed, here, which means unable or unwilling.
Henceforth means from this time, onward, or always. I'm guessing you meant forthwith which means immediately.
Yes........all of my yes..........all of it
HOT
Why can't I upvote this twice???
I think you meant "wreak".
This was probably the most enjoyable chapter in the story so far for me. The only thing that I like more than some awkward gender-bending is perhaps, even more awkward, mind-swap
Although, I think that you could slightly expand the descriptions of how the two altered characters feel about the new, alien sensations they experience.
Oh, by the way, Shining...
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did I spy a Fifth Element reference in there?
I think the only thing that could have possibly made this chapter better is if Luna decided to partake, instead of just running off to leave them alone...
Besides that, brilliant work, brilliant!
2726781 I agree
2727432 I continue to have very smart fans.
2727247 2726909 Thank you both for your helpful input.
2727458 Who says she won't later?
2727632 you appear to have mistaken nerditude for smartosity.
2727642 nerditude? smartosity?
Here we go!
To make her into a delicious potion!
This story is so good! Clop is hot, and the comedy is spot on! Oh, and the constant pop-culture references are awesome. Shakespearicles, you and this story have been favorited.
I read!
Shiny is supposed to turn into an Alicorn now!
Because that's how it works. ....Magic and Penises ...
The fanfictions told me so!
Get that threesome! in the next Chapter, it is worth seeing Shining Armor with two Princesses.
Another great chapter in this glorious storie
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Oh, the hypocrisy kills me. Made my day.
2728174 I assume you are either talking about this, or more likely, this.
I've read both. They are AWESOME and I highly recommend them to everyone.
Unfortunately, that is not what is happening here.
Typical. So many husbands can't bring themselves to suck their wife's dick.
Might I say, that was an amazing chapter! Like always, you never cease to make an astounding story with some of the wettest, dirtiest, hottest sex I've ever read! A true work of art! Hot, gooey, cum splattered art!
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Oh Yea!
Giggity! Giggity!
Good chapter
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In our defense, few wives actually have dicks, though I'm certain there are at least a few guys who have no issue with "eating out".
At first, I was irked because you described the hymen as being a couple inches in, but then I realized you could mean it's that deep within the vulva. And then I did my research on horse genitals.
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I was just makin' a joke, dude. There's the old stereotype of the guy who refuses to eat pussy even when he gets blowjobs, and I thought it was funny that now we've got a guy who refuses to suck dick when he gets eaten out. No worries.
"Don'tsayTwilight. Don'tsayTwilight. Don'tsayTwilight."
darnit , i was expecting him to say twilgiht :/ .......
also i want the source of that pic.....
So Peter where do you see yourself in five years?
Peter: 'dont say doing your wife, don't say doing your wife, don't say doing your wife'
Doing your ... Son?
XD caught the Family Guy reference
That was a beautiful chapter. I'm bisexual, so reading about genderswapping is a huge turn on for me because I imagine the character in both their sexes.
This is currently the only story on my 'watch list.' I crave it so desperately, you can't come out with chapters fast enough!
2732695 : Here
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I believe this is where I give you a similar response about me just going along with the joke. Besides, where I'm from, excellent oral sex is something most guys try to brag about (when such topics come up), usually because bragging about penis size isn't really effective any more and is often considered "immature".
Sadly, this also means we have a bunch of preteens bragging about how big they are. It gets a little awkward to even mention when the kids who barely even hit puberty want to compare sizes to prove their "manliness".
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Fair enough. I figured I'd err on the side of politeness for once.
> Besides, where I'm from, excellent oral sex is something most guys try to brag about (when such topics come up),
Really? Huh. I would not have expected that.
> Sadly, this also means we have a bunch of preteens bragging about how big they are. It gets a little awkward to even mention when the kids who barely even hit puberty want to compare sizes to prove their "manliness".
I'm just waiting for the old practice of children being trained as thieves to come back into fashion. Pickpockets and grease men (contortionists who could get into tight passages or vents) were frequently between six and fifteen because of their size and small fingers.
And now I feel vaguely dirty talking about the small fingers of children. Anyway.
2734656 2734719 And then it got weird.
Says the man who writes erotic fiction about equine intercourse.
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Not as weird as it could have been. I almost made a Schindler's List reference. (He speaks about the small hands of a child during a point in the film, but it's very classy.)
Anyhizzle, you write lovely equine intercourse. The genderbent stuff isn't my thing, but you write it well enough that it's worth reading even when it doesn't pry the clamshell, so to speak.
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I am a dude and approveth this of.
2734612 oh i think i've seen that page before , to bad though i thought those 2 together were the original pic , guess i'll just stick with your edit.....
2735784 Damn skippy!
man here who find the whole scene rather hot and i have to say, this, this gender swap problem is the most ingenious, original, well thought, and a perfect way for your story to address the problem of the show about Shinning and Cadance not showing for the ceremony at the end of that chapter, it just "fits so well" in your story (pun intended )
i wonder if the spell that Celestia casted on Twilight is broken when Discord changed her, because i loved how the drama involved Twilight even if we didn't had much interaction with her in person, and when that spell came and made Twilight forget i was a little sad but then i remembered Discord and since you are so tied to the canon show that you could make this story its Conjoined twin i was hoping that he will play a part in the whole picture, that could also explain why Twilight was being so weird and crazy in the next chapter of the show, i think being bombarded by the forgotten feelings for your brother is a better excuse to go crazy as opposed to, you know, just being late for one assignment, that you could have forgotten by, you know all of those thoughts about your brother
my mind is weird
and damn you Shakespearicles now i want to read about Shinning and Luna getting bedded by Cadance, what have you done to me and a sudden weirder image popped in my head, what about a chapter where Twilight, Shinning and Luna get bedded by Cadance
P.S. great chapter
P.S.S. do a bonus chapter with Shinning, Luna and possibly Twilight too, being bedded by Cadance
I love the awkward moments in the story so much lol.
2739311 huh?....
10/10 best fic 2013.
I never did like gender swappery.
Cadance with a dick? Gross!
Shiny losing her virginity by a forceful, brutal Cadance not in control of her emotions? Eww.
Oh and a Fight Club reference at the start.
10/10 Would jerk off to again. Moar please.