Shining Armor finds Twilight's secret diary and he doesn't read it... for about 5 seconds.
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On hiatus until after Cloptoberfest.
Will resume on Nov 2nd. Sorry.
I think the hiatus thingy should be removed
Link at the end of the story doesn't show the pic
Gotta say it was one big hurdle for them to overcome. Now I'm waiting to see when Chrysalis shows up, Cadence finds out and Shinig Armor gets lucky in bed, thrice.
3276516 Even tho I knew it was coming still NOOOOOOOOO
3276516 This makes me sad... but thanks for keeping us in the loop. We look forward to seeing you return to this in a month.
3276856 Believe me, I would downvote my own comment if I could. There is no pleasure in me putting off this story. But Cloptober has arrived and I promised I would participate. So there is THAT whole other 50K smutty story to look forward to at the end of October. I'll still be in the forums dropping hints about things to come.
3276675 Fixed.
Cloptoberfest!? AWESOME!!! I'm participating via comics since I'm not a writer. lol
woopsie seems like something got past the defenses my good Shakespearicles
i´m a little sad that after all, they only got to oral sex but there are still chapters ahead until November Shaky
P.S. HA they said i was mad, that i was delusional , but i knew, Discord WAS the reason Twilight recovered her memories
P.P.S. i love the take you had on the wedding pictures yes Celestia finally got her revenge
soooo... whats next? Chrysalis making a return and interfering with the whole Crystal Empire? a month is way too long
Hiatus? Noooooooooo-ok. It is your story. You write when you can.
Now, on a different note:
YES! After all this time, they finally spill out their feelings for each other, to each other. I wonder how things will be between them now...
3277195 Only tangentially responsible. Twilight saved herself really. Thanks for the catch btw.
You should totaly make this good interesting story turn downhill.
On Hiatus!? NOOOOOO!
Where shall I go for my cloppy Twilight X Shining now!?
Tension released. Sad to see it being put on hold. Will be worth it in the end.
hiatus
but good story so far
Small typos
"Several changeling drone flew into the broken windows."
drones
And maybe: ... through the broken windows." ?
"Shining for his part seemed to have no more ill effects from the queen."
Maybe suffer no ill effects?
"Imagine my surprise when I find out that your getting married out of the damn blue!"
you're
"After everything they've been through. finally together at last.""
FinalyFinallyEDIT Ugh herp derp. :)
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In last chapter there is still:
"Make no mistake Captain, Equestria yet has many enemies."
3278006 *Finally.
Also, thanks for the help.
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ABOUT DAMNED TIME!
Oh, and thank you for that.
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full serious
It was about time this happened. The Hiatus put me down but hell we waited months for this a month is nothing.
I Swear that Cadance know and she is waiting to get Twi in the bed too. She is the Damm Alicorn of Love.
GREATEST CLIFFHANGER EVER!!!
Seriously that was amazing, great way to leave it in my opinion, cause it leaves me with that hope that they will hopefully soon consummate their feelings. The wait till next month will be long, so with that, I leave you with this song, which I honestly think fits these two really well, hope you enjoy.
3278807 Yea, I had similar thoughts on that as well. I guess we'll just have to see.
3278941 I'm partial to this reaction.
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I'm a bit confused, how does taking incriminating photos of the them equal revenge on the Foal Free Press, it was the Crusaders that did that, not them. Also Spike dancing with a minor, Spike IS a minor, how is that incriminating?
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But in all seriousness, I just wanted more Cakelestia action. The scene isn't important to the main narrative. Except for being the best explanation for why an anonymous threat would be made against the city when the queen's entire plan was to infiltrate/ invade in the first place. As a celebrity, Celestia would be right to be paranoid regarding cake at a big event like this after the Foal Free Press scandal.
Or maybe her low blood sugar is just making her delusional. Dealer's choice.
OI! I drew something based on your fic! Twining Sparmor is my fav ship~pair! ^-^
Check it out here!
3279506 I you.
I had already found that image yesterday. I didn't realize that it was my fic that had inspired it.
That is awesome!
3279532 This is my fav Shi-Twi fic ever, so I figured I'd pay homage! ^-^ (Right Now Big Brother is probably my second fav.)
SO AWESOME!!!!!!!
Say love at last time...
I look forward to the return and what you create for the Cloptoberfest. This is one of the funnier takes on the whole Shining/Twilight relation that I have read.
Took me 5 days but at last read it all...
You sir are the biggest tease of all of fimfiction.net....and enjoyed every second of it.
wonderful story.
OMFG THAT ENDING!!!!!!!
You sir, are (in the absolut best way possible) the trolliest, most hilarious, and biggest tease of all of fimfiction.net....and loved every second of reading this piece of fanfic diamond encrusted platinum (gold doesn't do it justice)
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I swear to god if I come back from Basic to find out this story was just a drawn-out prequel to the NSFW Liquid Pride comic... Jimmies will be rustled...
this was just beautiful!
I'm really hoping to see more of TwixArmor now that they both know the truth!!
'on hiatus'
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3276516 This chapter has errors that I am too lazy to point out
The Matrix FTW!
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But seriously, it's not.
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I C wut U did there...
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To repeat for those who don't read my blog: Liquid Pride is only on temporary hiatus until after I win Cloptoberfest. It WILL resume on November 2nd.
Is it just me, or did you use some of the FiW episode 8 title puns thought up?
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This was absolute gold! Pure, luxurious, gold! Damn fine job!
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Fuck yes I look forward to it.
I can't get the picture to load so I'm going to assume making grilled cheese sandwiches and snuggling up watching military documentaries.
[spoken]
I've heard people say that
What we're doing together isn't natural, Twily
Oh no
But I don't know about that
If that's wrong then I don't wanna be right
We've shared love and made love
It doesn't seem to me like it's enough
There's just not enough of it
There's just not enough
Oh oh, babe
[sung]
My sister, I can't get enough of your love, Twi
And I don't know I don't know why
Can't get enough of your love, Twi
Oh, some things I can't get used to
And I'm not gonna lie
Don't care if it's weird, you're all I want
And Twily, that's no lie
Oh no, Twi
Tell me, what can I say?
What am I gonna do?
When nopony knows the truth but Luna?
What kind of love is this that you're givin' me?
Is it just incest or also polyamory?
Twi, all I know is every time you're here
I feel ashamed
Tense my hooves
I scream your name
And sense impending doom
My sister, I can't get enough of your love, Twi
And I don't know I don't know why
Can't get enough of your love, Twi
Oh no, Twi
Sis, I'm glad that I have you by my side
And glad you understand
Cadance might want to skin my hide
Or have something worse planned
Oh well, Twi
How can I explain all the things I feel?
You've put me through so much
Twi, it's so unreal
I might just lose my lunch
Might just be a crime
I'm a guard what should I do?
I think you blew my mind
Twi, all I know is every time you're here
I feel ashamed
Tense my hooves
I scream your name
And sense impending doom
[spoken]
Twily, you've got your whole life before you
But you know what'd happen if this scandal would break
Your life would crumble at your hooves
[sung]
My sister, I can't get enough of your love, Twi
And I don't know I don't know why
Can't get enough of your love, Twi
Oh, some things I can't get used to
And I'm not gonna lie
Don't care if it's weird, you're all I want
And Twily, that's no lie
Oh no, Twi
And the truth is out! Finally! Now I wonder how this will end...
3385831 For your love of Bob Seger, I feel obligated to refer you to this masterpiece.