Shining Armor finds Twilight's secret diary and he doesn't read it... for about 5 seconds.
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3582614 Finally... that season gap always sucks.
Edit:
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3589152 Thanks for the help!
Though "Sombra hadn't power enough" is correct.
YUS! Out of estory I have favorited, this is the one I was most eagerly waiting for.
But...
Really? You're gonna hanging for two months and end it that fast?
3589282 I was originally going to finish it before the premiere before shit hit the fan IRL. I'm playing catch-up now. Besides, I have loads of other story ideas after this.
It will have been worth the weight.
I don't ever use the adjective 'epic' lightly.
3589292 YAY! Thank-you for this new chapter! I've been waiting too long! Must read now!
OMG is here is here.
I cant wait to read it. Long live Shakes.
Please dont leave us again.
hubawah!?!
I understand how Twi and Shining feel and I enjoy all of that a lot, but I feel really bad for poor Cadence. If she ever finds out she's going to feel so betrayed.
Dude, I hate to mention it, but linking mid-story like that is verboten now. Might want to yank that out before some spoilsport complains.
3589502 Bummer. Thanks for the heads-up though.
Edit: BTW, props for 'verboten'. I love seeing S.A.T. vocabulary thrown around. It reminds me that I have smart fans.
As if the fact that you're a fan of mine in the first place wasn't evidence enough of that.
but please with an sequel hook I really like this story^^
Please please dont let it end like this.
Finally, what a way to finally have them consummate there long repressed desires, god I have been waiting forever for this chapter to arrive...I so cant wait to see the possible consequences that will arrive.
Dhohoho, Shining—I don't think she will! After all, whenever she saves your rump, she's also saving it for later!
Glad to see this story back alive! Kudos to you for using the term "on hiatus" properly, unlike most authors, to whom it means "dead unless a miracle occurs"
Great chapter. I love the bit where throwing Cadence was supposed to kill her
And sexytimes with Twilight are always great. But you missed an opportunity to have him ogle her winking vulva the whole time they were walking The whole buildup and act felt a little rushed, but I guess that's just what happens after 3 months of deprivation And he did pretty much give her permanent permission before the wedding, so I think it's ok even if she was a little forceful.
Typos:
"I could be dangerous!" Yes Cadence, I'm sure you could. But I think that should be "it".
"After some time of quite snuggling" Should be quiet. So many people make that one, it's becoming quiet annoying
"To be epicly concluded", I'm pretty sure that should be "epicly continued FOREEEEVVERR"
But really, I can't wait to see how it all works out Will he divorce Cadence, or will they go polygamous? Will there be lots of lovey dovey discussion of their history and future? Will Twilight get pregnant? Will the baby be hideous, or will they get lucky? What would their mother think?
Actually, one chapter seems awfully short to cover all the remaining issues and get to a stable "status quo" state. But I shall withhold my judgement until I've seen what you have planned
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> Implying conclusion in one chapter.
> Implying chapter would be < 15,000 word.
see. epic
2: very great or large and usually difficult or impressive
But in all seriousness, I had three more chapters in mind. But I just need to work out my outline in the meantime. The 'remaining issues' I need to tie up are fairly cut and dried on my end. I know how it's going to end. I just need to get there. As it stands, I -could- finish it in one large chapter. I'd rather not though. I hate to see this story end as much as anyone. But I do have other stories I am itching to get to eventually.
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I found a few errors, but TABLET ;_;
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Ah, so you actually know what epic means, too I figured it was the modern usage, as in "there'll be one more chapter with lots of action 'n stuff"
I'm sorry I ever doubted you.
To see such a good story end is sad but I hope it's a good ending
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Yeah, me too had to use Sigil to regenerate the table of contents on the epub...
3590829 No.
It will be a GREAT ending!
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3590971 Dat ain't what I meen
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And im just commenting about the errors I found
And there it was, ladies and gentlemen, the moment we've all been waiting for.
Now the question is, 'what might come of this?'
As for Twilight's 'test'... I hope something akin to this happens
There is no best case scenario for this anymore is there?
There's no "Threesome ending hardcore unlock 100% completion". It's just going to suck like... like...
Twilight on Shining's wedding night.
Like Luna after a thousand years
3594541 Well canon wise Twilight doesn't see him again for 8 episodes and I'm hoping in that time the Cadence/luna threeway happens
Also, with the latest episode, that daring do thing was funny.
Aw man, my favorite fic is going to be ended?
Oh well. It was one hell of a ride at least. :P
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giggity
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One I love your name and profile image. Second I'm sad and gladdened that the conclusion to this series is nigh. Thank you for the fabulous time Shakespearicles. Memories of this story will bring me delight for years to come. Truly you have done a service to all of humanity, or at least to me.
Found this today.
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lol she has no wings.
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Wow, I feel so special. You actually replied to me!
NO
THIS FIC DOES NOT END
IT MUST END WITH CADANCE AND SHINING GETTING DIVORCED AND SHINING GOING TO LIVE WITH TWILIGHT, I DID NOT COME HERE TO SEE SOME F**KING EPIC FIC CONCLUDE WITH THE TRUE LOVERS STILL ALIVE AND NOT TOGETHER! YOU GOD DAMN F**KING A**HOLE!
love,
Lunaisthebest
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nu, seriously, i begging you to contiune this fic
Just finished detailing the outline. Already over 1,400 words.
EDIT: 1,800.
You know when what you're writing is going to be good, when even you, as the author, can't wait to see it done. Seriously, I'm getting giddy just doing my outline of events to come. This is going to be so awesome!
That is the best reasoning for this ever and I now accept this as canon
3597312 lol yeah i thought that too ^^ ....
man these are pretty dang great , i simply love how you weave this story's arc into the canon of the show , and im pretty sure i got all the references.....
Twi speaks for all the readers here.
Finally! It happened! And it was fucktastic!!!
Too bad it's almost over, but maybe there will be a sequel or another Shiningsparkle clopfic?
HAH! If pony reproductive systems are any bit as effective as human, Shining's "Countermeasures" in preventing that pregnancy is as effective as washing away completely oil from a plate with just your finger.
Ah, but hey, magic bitch.
>.>
<.<
Welp I missed the hype but damn good chapter nice use of the crystal body for some kinky x-ray sex
I merely bawl my lungs out laughing at this part
seems like Sombra and some agriculture products (seed yeah I went with that pun sue me ) slipped their way where they weren´t welcomed
onward to the finish
I say Twily is gonna get one proud shiny son.
The first sentence of this chapter looks like it had part of another one jammed into it.
Best part of the chapter right there!
Oh, and then there was the sex.
Ummm...
Hrmmm...
Nope, the wife-tossing was still the best part.
fuking LOL
Nice chapter.
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