In the 900 years after Discord’s magic engulfed the land in his malfunctioned curse, Technology and ponykind has advanced. They go about their daily lives, oblivious to their true origins. A young man, Crisp, in college has a little trouble with his family and his housing, needs a place to live and he gets a lucky break that sends his life down a path he never thought possible. How will he adapt to the changes to his life that his new friends bring him, and when his past rears its ugly head, how will it affect him and the people around him?
Credit for the cover image goes to FEuJenny07 http://feujenny07.deviantart.com/
Chapters (32)
Will King Sombra be appearing in this fanfic?
2340479
Yes. King Sombra shall be in this, although it is sometime off from his entrance.
I like it so far. Oh and last chapter when he was being sat on was funny.
Yes I've been wanting to see what happens next. Also I don't understand why this has so many down votes?
2571163 Yea. its weird to me too. This is again a first story, so its gonna be kinda crap in places as I figure out how to correctly put things forth and what not, but i feel like im getting the hang of it.
Needs more capital I's.
2697452
Thank you, I seriously thought I had caught all of them last time I went through the story. They should all be properly capitalized now.
Yay! capital I's.
Lovin this story
2701020
Thank you. It's nice to hear that people like it
I can't imagine why this has so many dislikes, it is well written and is much more believable than many other stories with better ratios
2717523
The first chapter, in my mind, is undeniably weaker than this successor. It made over 13 dislikes in a very short while, causing the second chapter to take almost two weeks to post. It's been steadily getting more views, likes and favorites as the story progresses
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Also, I'm preeeetty sure that if I would just publicize it, that likes would maybe come in
This looks like an interesting Self Insert story!
I'll take a look at it and give a review about it!
look, don't label it as a self insert, there is no such thing as a story which is not self insert because no matter what all characters any author writes are in some way a reflection of themselves, their personality, their friends, or their enemies and thus a self-insert
2740388
Thank you for taking the time out your life to read over and possibly review this, but 2740965 is correct, this is not a true self-insert. That is because Crisp's personality is what could have been. It's more of a deviation of my mind, altered by our different lives.
.......And.....I'm just left wondering..........what happened........uuuuuuuuuuuugghhhhhhh
Honestly thank you for making Blueblood not seem like a dick.
3663478 Right? He isn't a dick, he's just so full of himself that it made sense to me that he was the Alpha male stereotype. All you see is dick, but I like to think of it as more a less psychopathic version of Gaston, if the comparison makes any sense.
Amazing. Well written. Great story and plot. Great characters. Also few grammar errors. This is by far my favorite romance story on this site.
Was wonderful. I hope you continue
Hey, um... When is the next chapter? I can wait but I reallllly want to know.
I have no idea what's going on here now.