• Published 25th Mar 2013
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Broken Butterfly - I Am The Night



When Fluttershy is raped, what will be done to bring those responsible to justice?

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If Lightning Flash thanked God... wait, only humans thank God. Something tells me he's not really a pony. :trixieshiftright:

Great, I felt awful with Flutty's rape, AND NOW TWILY WILL BE RAPED TOO?:fluttercry:

4860181 He's a human in Equestria, but arrived as a pony.

Open a gate to a place where you do not belong and you open the gate for monsters

4862558 That's an interesting plot mix.

Lightning's right. Equestria used to be a peaceful place. Now, there's rape, murder(homicide) and abuse. Thefts are uncommon at best. Either the stallions that raped Fluttershy are stupidly horny or they're more like Lightning: ponified humans with a sick and twisted mind. That would make sense. In some fics, Discord would say that humans are the most chaotic of races. Luna in another fic mentioned that humans are capable of the worst of atrocities, but some are capable of heart-melting compassion.

The line between human and pony is blurred, at least on a mental basis. Mares acting like women, men being men... Finally, Equestria is either a paradise... or a living hell.

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Is that sarcasm?

If not, a human turned pony isn't too interesting. It's been done before.
If it is, I saw your sarcasm. :D

4868339 Thanks. I'm working on my sarcasm skills. :rainbowlaugh: Is Lightning Flash your OC or your ponysona?

When Fluttershy is raped, what will be done to bring those responsible to justice?

My mind: "You have raped Fluttershy and now you must die

3A

Hoo boy! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Aww shit she gonna get rape cool story can't wait for the next chapter

Story's dead, a moment of silence for it.

6718301 Not dead, just not my priority for the time being. :D

6719184 Oh sorry, I thought someone else wrote this. Figures the brain won't work when it's needed.

It's been awhile since I read this, is this story really dead? If so then damn that's a shame it was really good

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For the while, yeah. I might rewrite the whole thing for a more modern sense - plus I've got a bunch of other stories I've been working on, haha. I'm trying to limit myself to one story for a while, and keep diving all in.

Finish so I can read! Please.

Hello I Am The Night
I have been waiting for a long time for a new chapter, is there still hope?

About 90% of the things on Earth don't even exist here: Television, computers, phones, Ipods.

I'm still wondering how Applejack contacted Rarity in Somepony to Watch Over Me

Hello I Am The Night

When is the next chapter coming?

will it continue soon?

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Honestly, probably never. I've been awful with updating any stories, and especially those that have been on the back-burner for over ten years at this point. I did talk about potentially remaking it in the future, but that never went anywhere. I've been writing and drawing on /mlp/ and other sites, but I definitely would like to work on some of my stuff here again sometime.

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