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MasterBrony Forever


Hey! MasterBrony Forever here with a short Bio.Favorite character's from the show are Spike & Discord! Improving my writing over the past few years.

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Spike is tired of doing everything Twilight forces him to do. On day she pushes him off the edge and runs away into the Everfree Forest. Twilight realized what she has done and gose out to find Spike.

Will she get him in time before his life is in danger in the deadly shadows of Everfree?

Has been extended here: The Rise of Spike the Dragon

A random short story I made for a school project. Pay it no mind, it is poorly written and not edited. I decided to post for no reason what so ever.

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You did this for a school project what did ya teacher say?:derpytongue2:

2137136 She hasn't said anything yet.

2137611 what year are you in?

I like it. It could be extended alot making it about 3-4 chapters long...:pinkiesmile: Oh well, good luck with future stories! See ya! :pinkiehappy:

2137828 I am a Junior, so 11th Grade.

2137932 If I truly thought this out I could make it longer and a hole lot better. Yet with this one, I wasn't giving it may all. I was planning to make a story similar to this one anyway.

And indeed you did make a similar story to this. And might I say it is a sucess.

good story but I've never liked it when Spike runs away just to end up in a situation were he has to be saved be the very ponies he ran away from :applejackunsure:

7338608 I wrote this a while ago, and I had after all this time I have improved and changed my style of writing. If I was to go back and fix this, it wouldn't end like it did. And it would have been much longer.

One of the stories that got me into writing.

Thanks for writing it all those years ago.

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Oh, wow. Glad I was a way to encourage you!

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