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Modern Equestrian history holds that the country of Equestria was founded when the Royal Pony Sisters, Princesses Celestia and Luna overthrew the Lord of Chaos, Discord, with the Elements of Harmony. Of the time before, little else is known, except for what the Princesses themselves reveal.

When on the sixth night after the defeat of Nightmare Moon, and the passage of the Elements of Harmony from their old bearers to six new ones, a powerful pony prisoner from the Princesses' past plots to prevent them from prolonging his punishment. Celestia, Luna, and the Elements of Harmony now face a moral dilemma. Is it just to imprison him again for crimes that he denies committing, or is this pony too great a threat to turn loose on the ponies of Equestria? (Now with alliteration!)

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Where is the rest. I need it now.

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The rest is resting, it needs its beauty sleep:raritystarry:.

Comment posted by Ponycletian deleted Jan 31st, 2013

Interesting story :twilightsmile:

I’ll be honest I loved everything about the fic but the ending, it was a fun read on the Moralities of Warfare and what exactly made you a monster or if someone should even be called a monster for doing what others had set them out to do.

But if this Guy’s supposedly order incarnate how in the hell does he just accept all this, Order demands Justice and what celestia and luna did was a direct attack on Order. Not only that I don’t understand why he would ever trust them again. Despite an understanding of why they did what they did, that does not excuse the fact that they put an otherwise innocent man who did what his job entitled him to do which was “keep as many ponies alive and end the conflict with minimum casualties in any way he deemed possible” makes me mad. The fact They put him under 1500 years of imprisonment with no penalty. Like if he at least went “I forgive but I cannot forget.” or “if you want to come over for tea or crumpets I’ll always be happy to oblige but if you ever invite me anywhere you’ll be sorely disappointed.” Like I wasn’t expect the incarnation of Order to start yelling and scream but I was at least expecting him to drive home his lost in faith with the sisters. He said he’s a pony with emotions that he’s good at hiding so it feels really odd for him to just let it all go. Still everything until that point was Ok.

Towards the end Though my general emotions were I dislike Order for being overly forgiving, I understand but dislike the main cast for their biased view on Order, I hate the sisters for putting a man in power then putting them in a closet like a freaking used rag and I dislike how we never got into short the story is but I’d still favorite, comment, and follow.

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