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DragonOverlord2012


I'm a mad man. I'm a man of honor. I'm a sociopath. I'm a brony. For all my conflictions, I'm pretty stable, though you'll probably call me insane. That's fine, I enjoy it. I'm just hear to write.

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this has to be, the, most, amazing thing I've ever read.

2107153 Glad you like it so far. I'm not exactly happy about my current like/dislike ratio. I mean I knew this was gonna be risky to submit, but this might be a bit extreme. The next chapter I'm going to submit is my least favorite so far, and I had to rewrite a scene since it seemed...well stupid.

btw Might I assume by your username that you are a fan of Bleach?

This really is a great story, bro. I've read the future chapters in between my other stuff and I think that this could be something great.

Okay let me just say this is SEXY AS HELL!!!!!!!! Great stuff this is the BEEZ KNEES MAN THE BEEZ KNEES!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy:

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A: as long as you have fun writing it it can't be stupid

B: i am a big fan of bleach though i haven't had time to really get into it lately

C: I like trains
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well i like it, it feels.... casual. like a guy who just walks through a freaking warzone killing left and right without even looking up from a book....

MOAR MUST HAVE MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiecrazy:

2112991 Wait until you get to chapter 8. That's when we get the fun fight scene :twilightsmile:

2114329 If more tis what thou requires, than it tis more thou shalt get.

i, enjoy every second of this

I like the Drunken Rule.
I'm gonna use it forever now.

NEW CAPTER PLLLLLEEEEEAAAASSSSEEE I reread this and remembered how good it was hope for an update.

This story has been reviewed by: The Equestrian Critics Society

Story Title: The Farmer and the Monster

Author: DragonOverlord2012

Reviewed by: Shahrazad

The Farmer and the Monster would be rated R if it were a movie. In the first paragraph the main character drops two, “words you can’t say on television” and it keeps that tone throughout the entire piece. While the story does provide plenty of mature content, none of it really amounts to anything terribly meaningful. The main character likes to watch “Blade Trinity,” the quintessential popcorn movie. The Farmer and the Monster is much the same, entertaining without any real depth or intellectual content.

Full Review

Score: 6.0/10

2413719 You know I wish my friend would stop asking the Equestrian Critics Society to review my stories before they're finished. The story has barely even started to be completely honest and is nowhere even near finished, and at the moment I am unable to even continue writing or even submitting chapters in any of my stories. Bottom line: how can you base a review based on the first ten minutes? You can't. I'm glad that you bothered to review this, but I'm not glad that it happened this early on. Things get surprisingly more complex as time goes on, seeing as I only have roughly half of the currently written chapters submitted. I'm working on getting things moving again, but in the meantime I'm stuck.

When I'm further along could I ask you to do an updated review?

Also I assume buy the "words you can't say on television" thing that you're a fan of George Carlin. Fucking funny guy that knew no limits. Real shame that he died just four months after his final special, and somewhat ironic given one of the bits in it.

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You can request another review once the story is finished or after a substantial update, check this post for the rules for updated and final reviews. I don't handle the submissions/assignments. I am only the humble critic assigned to your story.

2428953 Thank you. I'll probably contact you in a month or two. I hope I can get to working on this sooner than later.

Why the hell does this have so many dislikes? And freaking stupid HiE fics always rack up the likes?
I propose an ALLIANCE BETWEEN HUMANIZED AUTHORS.
You know what, that sounds so good I'm going to make that into a group.

2669120 I think it may be because of the "wacked" first chapter. I'm gonna put a number of edits on it when I get the chance.

As per your group idea, and I will join it. Might I suggest simply calling it Humanized Authors Alliance?

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