The unveiling of the changelings rocked the foundation of trust of Equestria. The question of what to do with them divided the nation.
The war had no clear winner, but Equestria was devastated and it's people tired. A cease-fire was called and those with homes went back to them to try and make things right. But the questions were never answered. The war, unfortunately, begins again. This time in covert acts and secret labs. Yards McCanter is one such operative, working undercover at Ponyville with a full quest log of objectives. His first duty is to learn how to rekindle the Fires of Friendship.
Rated Teen for violence and suggestive use of a changeling.
Chapters (11)
OK, so I haven't read this and, in all honesty, I'm probably not going to. It is just not my type of story. But I still feel like I should offer you some advice and no one has commented yet. So here. Whether or not you want it, take it.
It is generally a bad idea to post all of a 14k word story at once, especially when said story is 11 chapters long. You want to start by posting one, two at most, chapters to get your first readers. Add each following chapter between three and ten days after if you have already written them. By posting such a large amount at one time you are scaring away potential readers. Most people only have time for a few thousand words at any given time. When you have more watchers you may be able to get away with posting large amounts at one time but it is not for new writers.
Other than that I don't have much to say. I'd read it but I'm not a romantic and I just do not like changelings.
Best of luck to you.
Wow, is this woefully under-appreciated! -probably because of everything Silver Moon already mentioned... Very nice story! You don't go directly to explaining everything, bogging stuff down--a very easy mistake that can really drag a story down in quality. You're writing is very fluid, too; you often skip mentioning who is speaking what, but your characters are so clear and unique that it's easy to tell without anyway! There are a couple small mistakes, but who doesn't make those every now and again?
Skills: you have 'em.
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