Used to write, doesn't anymore. Incredibly gay.
Twilight finds herself stuck in the human world for a week, luckily for her she has a human caretaker to get her various books so she can research everything about the new world surrounding her. After several days of reading she takes an interest in human acts of war, but how will she react when she witnesses one of these events occur over a live TV broadcast?
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Pretty good short read but I wish it was a bit longer.
not bad
Yeah, this reads more like a chapter than a full story.
we must know what happens, how shall this effect Twilight when she returns? Will he return with her? Will she attempt to help with this event?
MOAR!!!!!!
Needs more chapters please also good job but it could have been drawn out more also find and strangle you? Why would I do... is that my taco?!defences ready? 4chandata.org/images/threads/90858_Bucket%20equipped%20defense%20plus%202.jpg Attack!!!! But in all seriousness very good
needs some more meat to little info about a larger hidden story
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I tend to write short stories like this that hopefully make you go "Huh, that was pretty good." I'm not the best at long worded stories, probably something I'll try and work on for future uploads.
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I may consider writing another chapter as I did with my previous story, but don't get your hopes up
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Since I doubt I'll be writing another chapter for this the answers to your questions would be as follows: Probably pretty depressed for a little while, no, and no
I liked it. It was a nice, short, bite-sized piece that thoughtfully examined Twilight's initial reaction to seeing the 'horrors of war' - something completely foreign to the populace of Equestria.
Good job.
Can I suggest a better cover?
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Here's the source if you want it.
Good story
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