Something I thought of and typed up out of boredom while I was sick. Ratings and reviews are appreciated.
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Cloud Quake
Used to write, doesn't anymore. Incredibly gay.
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I enjoyed this, you have poked my feels.
This was really good for a first fic.
Very good dear Sir
Nice.
Thank you all for the positive feedback
....... o sorry. I was looking for the next chapter..... there isn't one. This is such a good launching point for a romance. You should seriously think about a sequel. This story was amazing in it's respects, and you ended it perfectly.
Awwww, it's over. It was a good one shot but now I want MOAR.
What's with the weird voice Luna? You sound like a troll.
Shut up Tia. I am allowed to express my feelings. ESPECALLY after you banished me TO THE MOON for a THOUSAND YEARS
I swear if you girls don't stop fighting I'm leaving you out of the next story.
Now that that's taken care of, You have deffenately earned this upvote and fave, Plus you have earned a stalker. And I'm midnight, so you will never see me comming in the shadows...
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Why thank you.. I think..
Personally I think this works out better as a one shot since continuing it would require me to have a more thought out plot line. Maybe I'll get sick again and be struck with inspiration
Oh god now I'm going to get packages in the mail that are infected with various viruses
Other than that I have an idea for another story floating around in my head but I shall spoil nothing about it. Could take two-weeks ish to get out.
*wraping sounds in the background, followed by "hand me that mask, I don't want to get smallpox"*O, what.... yea.. wouldn't want that to happen *Kicks package out window*Feel free to PM Blue Thunder from The Herd for any assistance. He loves developing ideas...
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STARCRAFT!!
please, continue! I'm intrigued
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I think I'm going to attempt to write a follow up chapter to this. I can't promise it will be as good as the current chapter but I'll do my best
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well you're doing great so far!
*one downvote Release the beast...
Sure here's one error
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FOLLOW UP WOOT.
Well.... I still want more Twidash from you, seeing how good you are at it.... But I am content with just this story.
1885688 I should write a clop chapter next
1886286 "More Twidash" Have I written Twidash before and just not realized it?
1887091... that was my bad....... i read a twidash earlier and got the two characters mixed...... What I meant was can't wait to see more stories from you.........
Idiot.
1887097 Lol, well hopefully you'll be seeing a story or two out of me over the coming weeks. And I'm sure it's a common mistake Celestia, don't be so rude.
Uhh no thanks
Just realised what my comments said
1887282 Don't worry about it too much, I'm sure that if I tried to write clop I'd wake up the next morning with my house covered in egg, tomato, and toilet paper
EEYUP
and a massive hole in your wall where I shot a cannon ball through it
"arg may'tes, that be the truth! if bucko here thinks about writing any darn clop fiction!"
*head and heart explode*
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*makes note of the sustained injuries in his notebook*
*adds another tally to the list on a nearby chalk board*
Maybe I should put a warning label on this.....
On another note I suggest you see a doctor if this continues as I plan on having another chapter out within a few hours
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my doctor told me to get a life
he's right
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I hope that's not the ending in this picture!
dis is too good!
and my doctor said to come back if I have anymore heart explotions
!!! another chapter!!! I thought the last one was the last one.