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Hearth's Warming Eve has approached as a full grown Sweetie Belle and family struggle to deal with the recent loss of their beloved Rarity. That is until a strange package is delivered to them from a surpising origin, containing what may be a gift of emotional peace and closure.
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Sounds Good. I will tell you what I think once I read it.
After read:
A few mistakes with corrections below the line:
with looks of grief as left her in a moment of silence
Using her her magic
as she opening her eyes,
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with looks of grief as they left her in a moment of silence
Alternative:
with looks of grief and left her in a moment of silence
Using her magic
as she opened her eyes,
Right in the feels!! This was a nice short fic. The question remains how did Ra... *Punch*
Annoying sycophant sorry it was a nice update. Very well done. Boss is just sad that Rarity is dead. Good job, to you!!
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TYVM
, fixed em 
Right in the feels.
Short, too the point, and manages to tug on the heart strings with incredible ease. The fact that there isn't so much description to bog down the story or emotion really helps convey the sadness of the tone. Thumbs up, you've earned it!
I am here for Azurini!
NOOOOOOOOOOO, RARITY!!!!!
Azurini told me to go here.
I like it.
Probably needs a tragedy tag...
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you are amongst friends. bad author! One does not simply kill our favorite fashionista
I can't express the amount of emotion this made me feel.
I actually cried manly tears; not because of the loss of one of my favorite ponies, but the way it was written reminded me of my own loss of a dear family member. Kudos.
You jerk!! You made me cry!!
I was listening to The Sound of Silence when I was reading this, which was a mistake. Either way, this was a good story!
This is so sad and depressing.