• Published 4th Sep 2011
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Broken Record - Wheller



Vinyl Scratch a successful Unicorn DJ from Manehattan, however this hasn't always been the case. Vinyl laments on her past, while in the mean time, a Dark force begins to move in the heart of Everfree Forest.

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Epilogue

Epilogue

Apple Bloom and Scootaloo practically had to drag Sweetie Bell out of their hiding hole, the fighting was over. Sweet Apple Acres was located about a kilometre to the southwest of Ponyville, the gryphons hadn’t even made it this far. Scootaloo’s Crusader Machine Carbine had gone unused, something that the fillies were both grateful for.

“Sweetie Bell! You need to snap out of it now!” Scootaloo said.

Sweetie Bell looked at Scootaloo blankly, as if she didn’t even recognise her. Scootaloo rose a hoof and gave Sweetie Bell a hard smack across her muzzle, to which she felt instantly guilty for afterwards

“Ow! Hey!” Sweetie Bell called out, bringing a hoof up and rubbing where Scootaloo had hit her. “What was that for?!”

Scootaloo looked down at the ground. “I’m sorry Sweetie... that was wrong, I shouldn’t have done that.”

“I forgive you!” Sweetie Bell said cheerfully. “I know you didn’t mean it.”

Guilt filled Scootaloo intensely.

“Well wha’ do we do now?” Apple Bloom asked. “All the fightin’ is over.”

“I guess we should probably go home?” Sweetie Bell suggested.

Scootaloo frowned. “Home... yeah, I guess,” however, Scootaloo was quick to put on a smile for her friends, “I’ll come find you guys tomorrow morning, maybe we can get our Cutie Marks by helping clean up town!”

Apple Bloom and Sweetie Bell grinned in excitement at the prospect. “Cutie Mark Crusader War cleaner-uppers! YAY!” they cheered.

Scootaloo waved them goodbye as they went to walk home. Sweetie Bell turned northeast, heading into town, Apple Bloom had gone inside her house. When Scootaloo was out of sight from both of them, she doubled back into the farm fields, heading for their clubhouse as fast as she could.

She didn’t want Apple Bloom or Sweetie Bell that she didn’t actually have a home to go back to.

Comments ( 7 )

Oh, my.....that does explain a lot about Scootaloo, come to think of it.

omg poor scootaloo :scootangel:

You sir have quickly risen to the top of my favorite story artists on here. I say artist because you have crafted a masterpiece that I would have sorely loved to see brought to the screen and you have made an epic Vinyl Scratch. She has a back story that has believable strife, character with flaws and strengths that flow with her and just overall... Speechless. I do hope that you keep crafting this alternate Sliders dimension of ponies unheeded by the actual canon. Just keep at it, you could easily turn this into a full fledged novel at this rate, I believe you already have enough pages for a complete book. If ever there were a way to do this like Lucas has handled Star Wars I would buy your book in a heartbeat.

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Thank you! Vinyl Scratch is my favourite to write about, and she'd be my favourite pony if she appeared in the show for longer than six seconds.

As for continuity, this series is nearing the end.

17451

It's talking about the dragon that killed Monty Ulan during his first death.

17468
Oh, right. :facehoof: This is what I get for binge reading. Some of the details begin to bleed together.

I love how you make Vinyl! As one of my first comment on i think the first chapter of the first book with the whole not capturing characters well, well... you're doing a great job! even with the background ponies who we dont actually know a lot about. You make their back stories really believable. Not just some random tragic thing that happened to them. This is an amazing story.

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