Carrot Top and Big Mac get to know one another after a local disaster. Misunderstandings and companionship abound! (18+ inside)
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Carrot Apple. Has a nice ring to it. Excellent job.
You know, the womb thing would actually hurt like hell.
Still, this was hot.
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You're absolutely right; it's just one of those things that has a very deeply erotic ring to it in erotic fiction. Besides, I feel there's a certain suspension if disbelief that has to go into writing that kind of work, anyway. Especially with the medium. They *are* horses. Kind of. Glad you liked it, though!
Was she trying to get pregnant at the end?
Nice, nice. I wouldn't call this erotica, I don't know, it just didn't do it enough for me.
Still a good little fic.
Hmm... I think I see a Chantenay Apple in the Ponyville's future. (That's a type of carrot.)
Very good job: never saw this pairing before and you did it justice.
It was an excellent romance, it had a very good buildup, it just seemed to take a while to get to the clop. Which makes it better. It felt more... realistic. too many clopfics today can be summed up like this: Meet for first time, go to house, have sex, end. Its kind of annoying, but okay if you need a quick fix. our story was very descriptive, and beautifully layed out. I see very few stories with this kind of buildup, and i really enjoyed it. Nice work!
Nice story... Carrot top seems a little eager to get pregnant with a stallion she's only had one date with but still nicely done.
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