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Frankie

Frankie #1 · Dec 21st, 2012 · · ·

Carrot Apple. Has a nice ring to it. Excellent job.

N00813

N00813 #2 · Dec 21st, 2012 · · ·

You know, the womb thing would actually hurt like hell.

Still, this was hot.

BackgroundFan271

BackgroundFan271 #3 · Dec 22nd, 2012 · · ·

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You're absolutely right; it's just one of those things that has a very deeply erotic ring to it in erotic fiction. Besides, I feel there's a certain suspension if disbelief that has to go into writing that kind of work, anyway. Especially with the medium. They *are* horses. Kind of. Glad you liked it, though!

Frizzy

Frizzy #4 · Dec 22nd, 2012 · 1 · ·

Was she trying to get pregnant at the end?

Vinyl_Shy

Vinyl_Shy #5 · Dec 22nd, 2012 · · ·

Nice, nice. I wouldn't call this erotica, I don't know, it just didn't do it enough for me.

Still a good little fic.

Abramus5250

Abramus5250 #6 · Dec 27th, 2012 · · ·

Hmm... I think I see a Chantenay Apple in the Ponyville's future. (That's a type of carrot.)
Very good job: never saw this pairing before and you did it justice.

Toxic Control

Toxic Control #7 · Dec 28th, 2012 · · ·

It was an excellent romance, it had a very good buildup, it just seemed to take a while to get to the clop. Which makes it better. It felt more... realistic. too many clopfics today can be summed up like this: Meet for first time, go to house, have sex, end. Its kind of annoying, but okay if you need a quick fix. our story was very descriptive, and beautifully layed out. I see very few stories with this kind of buildup, and i really enjoyed it. Nice work!

Lightning Flare