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So, I'm in "Equestria," and normally, I would be okay with this. But, I have no idea how to get home, and worse, I seem to be shifted over to random "Equestrias" at seemingly random intervals. And these alternate worlds I'm doomed to wander? They're the worlds of fanfictions.
So, in short, this is the story of me and my wits against the imaginations of the community of my fellow bronies.
I'm screwed.
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So I heard you like pony fanfictions...
Rated Teen for some violence, language, and some possible adult themes later on.
If you have a fic, or want to suggest a fic to send my poor, suffering OC to, I'm open to suggestions. I do have a general story line I want to follow, so don't be too upset if I don't include your suggestions.
On a related note, there are some fics that I flat out will not do, which can be summed up as "Clop or Cupcakes," meaning that I won't do a fic that has clop in it, or gratuitous gore for the sake of gratuitous gore. I may reference some grimdark fics, but that's it.
I will always try to ask permission before using your fic. If you see I've used your fic without having asked you first, that means I wasn't able to figure out a good way to contact you, and I apologise.
Also, I would appreciate it greatly if you would agree to look over my stuff before I publish it, to ensure I don't mangle your story too badly.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 57 )

Awesome story so far. Writing is wonderful, concept is a nice stray from the average and sounds very interesting. Looking forward to reading it.

Tell me friend... Are you accepting stories from your readers? :rainbowhuh:

"...and suddenly Pinkie Pie was Applejack."

intriguing concept!



:trixieshiftleft: Ann lies :trixieshiftright:

r14

intest i guss your kind of new becuase of the slye . its that is a wall of text and that is inming i have seen worse but some space inpertan pargaous would help or else people get bored.

1802145

It's indented bro, that means it's cool. I think that's what it's called anyways...

Really awesome concept. Seems pretty good so far.

So now a brony is sort of following the path of Sweetie Belle from "Fragments" (Wanderer D).
Interesting.

r14

1802204
it is better than others i have seen but it still has room for impovement because the slyed oesin make me want to read it it makes be want to close and find anther a story. just add a few blaks bewint pargarhs and it will be better. rember the enter key is your friend and your enamy too little wal of text:rainbowwild: too much and its spaced out as heck:rainbowwild:. just rigth eqaule pretty story.:twilightsheepish:
:moustache::heart:

1802131
I mentioned in the description that I'm open to suggestions, with a few exceptions.
1802140
:pinkiehappy::applejackconfused:
:rainbowlaugh:
1802145
:trixieshiftright: I've been reading a lot of Tolkien lately. :twilightsheepish: Sue me.

r14

1805145 i mean no offean by any thing im just telling you that some may not like that. i don't understand the relavnts of tolkein to this expect for the hobit being relased just days ago

1805526
I was trying to make a reference to how Tolkien tends to use "blocks of text."

lol. some coments say seen but its read. i'ts the best thing i've read

Comment posted by InkTapper deleted Dec 16th, 2012

1808257
Aww, thanks! :twilightblush:
1810491
Muhahahaha. :rainbowlaugh:
Don't worry, I'll try to get the next chapter out sometime during Christmas break.

How about Ponycraft by BladeSquall on DeviantArt?

1818348
I'll see if I can fit it in a few chapters from now.

1818383 favoriting to see where you take this, oh and I have a few suggestions for stories.

Living The Dream by Kickass222urmom
and
Waking Nightmares by KnightMysterio

Both Great fics, Living The Dream a bit more controversial but still!

i got one "past sins" by pen strokes, see how Nyx takes it

Hmm... tops and chess pieces... I sense a reference...

This looks, entertaining... I like the concept we have here! :pinkiehappy:

By the way, you can use my Lycanthrope based Fanfiction, I won't mind. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/73167/the-lycan-curse

Background Pony! Griffing the Griffin! The Incredibly Dense Mind of Rainbow Dash/other Winningverse fics!




Lolyep

PS: I call featured!

I like the concept, but the pacing really needs work. This entire chapter was basically "looking around and figuring out I'm in Equestria," which I think everyone reading already knows within a few paragraphs. It would have been much better if he figures it out more quickly, then you jump right into the point of the story - the fact that everything is based on fanfics instead of the original show. You're likely to lose people in the excessive description.

Sure, it would be hard to believe that you could end up in a cartoon, but I think that I'd recognize the animation style of the show instantly if I was standing in it. Just about every HiE story has this kind of "evaluating the situation" scene, and it's honestly kind of necessary for the story, but maybe play with it a little bit. I was expecting more of a parody, based on the summary.

What I'd recommend is that you reduce this first chapter to several paragraphs, and then have the "Applejack is an alicorn" and following events be your first chapter. It'll catch readers' interest far more quickly.

Quick question before I get into reading this. Is it necessary to read the others fanfics before this one? Awesome premise by the way. Very creative.

1891158
Good question. I'd say you could probably walk into this without reading the other fanfics first, as I'll try to identify any major plot elements of the fic early on. That being said, if you have the time, you should definitely read the fics that are referenced here, as that would help you understand the situation better than any summary I include.
Your choice though.

1806821
No full on clop. :ajbemused: Sorry to disappoint.
1889408
Thanks for the input, I'll keep it in mind if/when I decide to overhaul this whole thing and fix it up a bit, maybe when I finish Part 1 of this story. My only excuse is that I feel I have a tendency to not describe what's going on around the character, so I deliberately put in as much description as I can. That said, I am fully aware that the pacing is shot to hell, although if I were going to parody the "looking around and figuring out where you are" part of a HiE fic, I'd have to read more of them. Thanks for the advice, though.
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I'm suprised not more people have mentioned that, congratulations. This whole fic is going to be one long game of "Spot the Reference."
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And then suddenly there was a mountain of suggestions. I'll try to leave as many open spots in the master plan for suggested fics as possible, and thanks for keeping me in work. :pinkiehappy:

Now, if you all will excuse me, I need to go and try to wrap my head around the fact that not only is this fic actually getting a following, but that the JasonTheHuman actually read something I made. This is a very big moment for me.

You have to make it harder -- something like seeing the pattern.... Or maybe abandonment issues... Or Harmony Theory... Or Night's Favored Child...

not bad will wait with baited breath for the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

A conversion bureau? I'm sure that would mix things up. :pinkiehappy:

Do immortal game Do immortal game Do immortal game Do immortal game Do immortal game Do immortal game Do immortal game Do immortal game Do immortal game Do immortal game Do immortal game Do immortal game Do immortal game Do immortal game Do immortal game Do immortal game

Fallout:Equestria- that would be awesome:rainbowkiss:

If you want, you could do my story, "Where Are You?"
I'd love to see your OC suffer through that.

2120068
... I've heard terrifying rumors about how long that story is. I have enough in my list of stuff I need to read as it is! :raritydespair:
2121971
We here at BvsFF try our very best to keep you entertained and happy. :ajsmug:
2122820
The what-now verse? I haven't heard of that one.
2124103
I love how the sole stated reason you recommended that fic is that my OC would suffer there. :rainbowderp: :pinkiehappy: I'll look into it.
2120055

2191185 yeah, he'll suffer because of how bad it is.....:pinkiecrazy:

2192535
Oh, you mean that "I'm not a Brony, get me out of Equestria" story? Yeah... :twilightsheepish:remember that list of stuff I have to read that I mentioned? That story's somewhere in it, and the list is ungodly long by now.

2192535
*cough* Its actually called the TDverse, according to Writer.

Minds still riveted on Waking Nightmares. Yet.... Winds of Change(Jason the Changeling's fic) universe would sound cool...

This is going places.

Can you do one in the Koprulu Sector universe?

val

“That’s what I’m asking you!”
“... What?”
“He’s on second base.”
“... Who is where?”
“First base.”

I know thats a reference to

who is the tank
what is the mage
I dont know is the priest
why is the rouge
because is the hunter
tommorow is the warlock
I dont care is the paladin

4171943
Oh my god, that's hilarious. :rainbowlaugh:
I was specifically referencing the original Abbot and Costello sketch, but you earn a cookie just for that video.

val

4180707 no idea what Abbot and Costello sketch is
BUT OH YEA! cooookies

val

4180707 which sketch?
a specific one or what

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