The Seaponies

by opuscon789

Authors Notes

opuscon789:

Hello, thank you for reading this great story. I hope you enjoyed it. Me and Emmo13 worked so hard on this story and we hit some obstacles. We even written I think chapter 11 on Christmas Day. It funny how we written this. We started writing this story by just exchanging chapters. Then after I discovered something Nonagon did that we started to write them together. It was fun doing this story. We are also thinking about writing a sequel to this, Chapter 13 give you a clue on what's going to happen next. I will notify all the Fimfiction favoriters (The ones who favorited this story) once the sequel comes out. I want to thank you for reading and *BROHOOF* to all of you. That is all.

Emmo13:

Hi everypony! Like opuscon789 said, thank you so much for reading. It means so much to me (and opuscon789 too I’m sure) that you took the time to do so. It started with opuscon789 wanting to write a story about seaponies and he invited me to write it with him. I did so and I was surprised at how much fun it was. I mean, writing is fun, but working together on Google Docs was really fun to do. We spent many hours working on it and it was a great experience. I look forward to writing a sequel, or seaquel rather, with him. I hope you all enjoyed it. Keep reading everyone!

Comments

[Hope]

This story has been reviewed by TECS

Story Title: The Seaponies

Author: Opuscon789

Reviewed by: Hope

Short form:
A story by a relatively new author, “The Seaponies” is built on a decent concept, but has some significant problems. It has a bit of romance and some surprises in store for a reader who keeps reading until the end. I enjoyed the read mostly because of the ending, but I think that the author could do with putting a lot more time and effort into the scenery and characters.

Score: 3/10

Full Review Here