I like to write a lot supernatural and Rainbow Dash stories so expect me to do that
The mane 6 take a vacation to a water park after receiving free tickets from princess Celestia. After a day of fun and games the mane six fall into a reverse dimension of the park full of monster ponies.
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You just got a watch, and a thumbs up, I hope more comes out soon.
I wish I'd read this over better before it was posted, because quite a few errors were left unchecked....
EDIT: AND I JUST REALIZED WE NEVER BOUGHT A TICKET FOR BABS
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We can always go back and fix the errors. Anyways I'm just glad to see this up.
I wish you guys told me that you wrote the end of the chapter without me
2356094 you weren there
I get Fluttershy, Rarity, Twilight, and Rainbow Dash, but not the others.
2388513 I don't remember why Werebloom made sense. Scoots we made a dragon because she's all about her scooter, and now she can't ride it. Though, I don't think we mentioned we intended her as a fully grown dragon? Yeah, Scoots is supposed to be a full-sized dragon, and therefore cannot scooter. Sweetie is a shark because we wanted her to be something that can't sing, because she's good at singing. We didn't really know Babs' personality, so we're kinda making it up I think, and made her a plant pony for no real reason. I know the CMC are deeper than that, but I don't think any of us really know them well enough to make them actual opposites of themselves?
Applejack is a ghost because she's incredibly strong, and now she can't use any of that strength, she's a ghost, she can't touch anything. Pinkie as a fire elemental was my idea. I guess I wanted to torment her a bit. Fire elementals aren't allowed to be emotional in any way, shape, or form, lest they destroy all the things they hold dear. Pinkie isn't allowed to be happy. And she's not even allowed to be angry or sad about not being able to be happy. She has to stay neutral at all costs or else someone can get hurt. We went over the idea of Pinkie being a robot, because robots can't feel emotions, but we decided to go with the idea that Pinkie has to really restrain herself if she doesn't want to hurt her friends.
2388800 Okay, thank you for clearing it up.
"It was so hot that Rainbow Dash couldn't even fly." Would anyone like to explain this skullf
ckery? Because last I checked birds can fly all summer long, no matter how hot it gets. And living in Texas, it can get pretty damn hot. In fact, 110 degrees is basically guaranteed to happen at least once a summer.
And as a side note: it's never melted anything but butter, ice, and ice cream.
2628493 30 weeks later, I finally thought up an answer for you: I've decided we were using Celsius. Equestria is on the metric system. The only reason they're still alive is because magic.
3674648 damn.... so what you're telling me is that they're living in temperatures that would literally boil the blood inside their bodies till their lil' pony faces esploded? Ok, so magic keeps them alive, but that still doesn't explain how that would make her unable to fly? If anything, the abundance of heat should make a huge amount of rising air meaning that flying would be easier than ever.
3674758 I was betting on the air being too thin for any sort of propulsion, even if there was an enormous updraft. I don't actually know how birds and flying work though. I could be wrong.
3674894 the very short version of this would be that it would be incredibly windy due to convection currents, likely creating a gigantic storm, keeping Dash and all weather ponies across Equestria busy as hell until the heat wave wore off.
3674948 o3o;;;; Would you believe me if I said that pegasi normally fly by means of some extra radiant magic from the earth, but now none of them can fly because the land is using most of its magic to prevent the storm you mentioned, and the only bit of magic it can spare is the essential magic to keep the living stuff alive?
3675099 Not even if I was drunk. The land doesn't give a crap about what kind of weather goes on. If it did, weather pegasi wouldn't be a thing. And for that matter, if it were smart enough to manipulate the weather on such a vast and complex scale, then it'd probably do the smart thing and use that massive power to prevent the temperature from getting that high.
3675125 Then I have nothing. We're just gonna try to stick to keeping the weather mistake and hope noone else is knowledgeable about weather phenomena. o3o;;;;
3675152 s'pose. Besides, I already pointed it out, so I doubt others will.
Is there any chance you will return to this story?