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Zman537


What? You expect a trick? Go talk to another Zman, I'm busy.

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Great story hope to see more of it:moustache:

1662773 Don't worry. That was only part 1...:pinkiecrazy:

good story, but why the flying turkey jiblets did he start crying?

1664817 Shame, Humiliation, the shear fact that the universe hates him.

oh well arent i a bit:derpytongue2: but if his target was in the cave does that mean he kills breaburn?(not sure if i spelled that right)1664986

1665802You'll find out in part 2 just like everyone else

ok make it soon please!:twilightsmile:

Cress: Gotta problem use a gun, that don't work use a bigger gun.

1672598 and if that don't work, Use many many many many MANY guns:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

the only thing i don't like is the fact that i can't rate it up again.

Heeerrrroooo.

Cress Oh Gods not this poser again. shoots 12 in the foot and pushes him off the chair I really hate that guy, teamwork my ass,

Anton: Yeah but did you have to shoot him?

Cress: Yes,

Anton: mucho bueno mi amigo, esperando más!

I love the fact that James is almost the exact fucking opposit of Sarah:rainbowlaugh: Should prove to be funny if/when they meet.

:flutterrage:WHO DA FUNK PUT THAT DISLIKE!!!!:twilightangry2: AND WHY THERE BE NO COMMENT ON WHY?!!!!!

:twilightblush:sorry had to get that out... I hate it when people do that


Anyways BEHOLD! The latest wraith enemy of the Soul Reaver verse. The manipulative...Hamlet!

He'll be playing a BIG roll later and to all other wraiths out there, yes you can use him. just remember that he is practically the incarnation of the Jester from DMC3.

1719577 That's why I made him like that. That jester was the most annoying character in the game.:trollestia:

Rest in Peace Carlos and lend your soul to the multiverse :fluttercry:

1726940 Carlos was one of my friends Uncles... I met him once and he was a great man. In truth he died of a heart attack three days before Halloween and wasn't a miner but this was done in tribute to him.

1726994 That's Sad to hear, may he live on in the hearts of those close to him. :scootangel:

How did Twilight find out about James? That doesn't really make sense. Could you please elaborate?

Also, Sarah will have some fun with this guy, hehehe:pinkiecrazy:

1730345 she found out through Applejack. Why wouldn't AJ tell her friends about a wraith that's helped save Appleloosa?

1730358 Could you explain a bit? You never mention AJ in your story, so I can assume she wasn't there at the time, and a letter between Appleloosa and Ponyville would take longer than two days to get there. Serpenti and I are confused:rainbowhuh:

1730391 I admit that this chap was a bit rushed and needs some edit still. but my computer is going to hell which is not good for me or this story. that and my mouse hit he publish button instead of edit.:derpytongue2:

1730418 Yeah, that makes more sense. Serpenti understands, and we have some suggestions for editing:

1. Have more than two days pass and give enough time for a letter to reach Ponyville and Twilight mention it to the Princess(es).
2. Have Death suggest James head to Canterlot, due to the fact that Sarah is there and she could help him a bit in training.

1731457 Dean probably wouldn't want to bother himself with it. Sarah, while maybe not liking the idea of training James, would want excuse to beat the shit out of him. The two are pretty much exact opposites, so putting them together in that sort of situation would be too good to pass up. Also, I think Serpenti has Dean doing other things at the moment.

1731612 which is why that is such a great Idea!
Also....Editing is done!:pinkiehappy: just had to fight my PC in order to get on the site........again:ajbemused:

1730403 James: Your butt's probably going there too. WhichiswhyweshouldsticktogetherincaseSarahwantstokillus...:twilightoops:.....She's standing right behind me isn't she.

Sarah: Boo.
James:AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

1731763 Very nice, it makes more sense now. Though can I ask why Luna wants to meet him? It seems rather.... Pointless. He's nowhere near Canterlot, she's never seen him, and only knows about him offhandedly through Twilight's letter to Celestia.

1731832 He saved an entire town... It clearly is to show her gratitude.

James:*cough*Plot advancement.*cough*

1731839 Ah okay. Glad the issue with editing was sorted out too, Serpenti and I's skype call was full of sighs at the time, but it was mostly due to our tiredness, not just you:rainbowlaugh:

1731858 Speaking of Skype, I plan on getting an account once I can afford a new computer. I'm a little broke at the moment:twilightblush:

1731919 Kewl, really helps when planning crossovers, or having hour long, pointless conversations:rainbowlaugh:

1734108 my dinosaur of a computer would eat the orphan first..... I'd be out 5$:ajbemused:

Oh Mah Celestia! Yes, no, maybe so, I don't care GTFO! Run as fast as you can cuz somepony's gonna :trollestia: Getcha.

1773869 Thank you, I spent many hours figuring out a witty comment to say.

1857588 I'll give you a hint... Her name is hidden in the chapter, and she knows James

Cress: Would you look at that. :rainbowdetermined2:

Anton: What? :rainbowderp:

Cress: M. Night Shyamalan just showed up. :trollestia:

1858002 WRONG!! but feel free to guess again.

Comment posted by Fire Blanket deleted Dec 26th, 2012

“Mr. James, git up, git up!”
I swear to all things that I just read that in Shortround's so grating voice. I lol'd.

this is so good that i may not put a syringe with hydrochloric acid in it, and stab it into your neck.

Oh and Redeject. For the great soviet union built to last through the ages. (i know the national athem of the soviet union. Im proud)

He then did the face that Will Smith makes from Fresh Prince of Bel Air. The one that looks like he’s crying

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