The day Celestia had feared has come, but not in the way she thought it would. In stead of Chaos becoming an overbearing force and plaguing the world with darkness and hate, Order has won and taken it's place. Now, Equestria is not only being drained of Chaos, but of color, emotion, and choice as well. Discord, however, has found a solution. Having found that a race nearly as chaotic as him has been watching them from afar, he offers to let his power pull some to Equestria.
Now, six new heroes find themselves in a rather unique situation. Escape the world they have been brought to, or save it from itself.
Chapters (5)
Well this is definitely new. You have my attention, like and favorite my good sir. Oh and 5 Spikes.
2893417 Okay, went through it and found a few errors, are there any other spots I missed?
2894786 Thank you very much!
Now I have a question for you. Which human shall the next chapter focus on?
2894799 Either Tobias or Josh or even both, mainly because I see my own relationship with my brother between them. I'm the Tobias in our situations.
Save Equestria of the Order? Guy, you made my dream come true! And have Discord training humans for this just makes all better! Oh, thanks for this. Certainly favorite and waiting more.
Josh. It would be funny to see his reaction to an alternate dimension.
2894939 Now the question is, which one of the six should the first chapter star?
2895346 Thank you for the answer. Your vote has been added into the ballets.
2897042 I don't know.
I want discover more about all them. 
Tobias gets my vote.
2897298 Ah I see..... but which one do you want to know more about the most?
2903635 Hummm... okay... I choose Zach
2908055 Thank you for the vote. It has been added.
I vote for Joshua
Tobias
Still wanting to see Tobias.
Tobias
Thou hath captured my interest :3
I know the chapter was probably already decided on but I want to vote anyway :3 Tobias :3
3021674 I continue to tally votes as I write. If one starts getting ahead of the others I start to work on it. So all your vote really did is solidify Tobias' spot as next chapter.
Still, Thank you for voting and I'm glad I captured your interests.
3021861 oh ok and this really has a whole lot of potential AS LONG AS YOU PACE I have seen so many stories that had a ton of potential but it was ruined because they didn't pace it (I just finished reading one like that) it's a sad thing that happens :(. Also are the ponies like ponies? Or not ponies? I didn't see the anthro tag but I've read a few that were anthro or humanized that didn't have a tag
3021933 If I don't say that they are anthromorfic then they ain't. Josh saw in chapter 1 and I quote 'a unicorn.... with wings'. That says he saw Twilight Sparkle the Alicorn, not Twilight Sparkle 'the freaky purple woman with wings and a horn in her head'.
3022020 ok I'm just making sure :3
This guy's reactions are the best. Can't wait for the next chapter starring him.
I'll vote for Michelle this time.
jeremy
3113599 I know! All I really did was base him off of my little sister when I give her 5hour energy, and now I have one of the most fun characters to write.
3113620 Short sweet and to the point. I like that.
Tobias :3 i want another tobi chapter
also DERANGED PINKIE :D
3115408 sorry buddy, but there will not be another Tobias OR Joshua chapter until all of the cast gets their beginnings.
3115557
Me: NOOOOOOOOO
Pinkie: NOOOOOOOOOO
Me *sigh* ok
Pinkie: WHAT? Gi you've never just said ok to something like this. You have to protest, tell the government, or or ...... OR SOMETHING
Me: *sigh* pinkie I'm not going to do that after what happened last time
Pinkie: that was pretty bad I guess I'll let it go this time
so many feelings...
3168883 thanks! Now would you kindly submit a vote on next chapter? The story won't continue until the tie is broken.
jeremy because fuck ladies first
also a quick question , is it so far, anti-brony, proud brony, closet brony?
3254526 yes
I vote Michelle.
Wow, how obvious can you make it that the tirade in the author's notes was straight out of Google Translate?
A better version (of the dutch one, at least) would go somewhere along the lines of
Still not perfect, but a whole hell of a lot better.
3256605 thanks for the vote. And I wasn't really caring how good a translation was. I was just ranting
jeremy
3436314 thank you for the vote. Now if some other people will vote, the chances for him to actually be the next chapter will go up. if not, it will be left to the dice.
Alexis
3438109 thank you for the vote and Ahhhhhh! NOW IT'S A TIE AGAIN!
3438109 dernit!
3438188 btw i enjoy this story
3438979 Thank you for saying that. It's good to know that at least some people on the site take notice of it. It's you and the rest of the few.... 15, people who have Favorited this that are the reason it's continuing aside from the fact that I freaking love writing this story and the very concept of it.
I'm also glad that I'm finally at this point in writing. As soon as the next chapter is decided, then I'll have a set order for how the story progresses.
On who's next. My answer is...
yes
3457724 your comment is a troll and I can't bring myself to be mad at it.
3457760
I's how I work bro
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jeremy. :D
3958445 THE TIE IS BROKEN FINALLY! I'm both happy and mad because I can work on this again but now I have more stuff I need to work on! SO MAY FEELS!
3958855 Haha! Awesomesauce!
jeremy