• Member Since 11th Apr, 2013
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you should probably get rid of the announcement cause its unneeded now and this starts differently than the original one
oh and when you do the chapter were we had him talking to that one god when he got his powers say something about it being told in the original that was deleted so people who read the one before this started anew dont have to reread it
atleast if pretty much the same thing will happen

Honestly, it's your story. But after ten thousand years he finally decided build a bigger house. Also, being ten thousand years old, wouldn't he be smart enough not to do somthing that would get him caught like that?

4554075 maybe, but when you're bored out of your mind, you tend to do stupid things

hey Hypersonic; can we get a progress report on this story if you can. This was a good story but now it has been months since anything happened and I'm curious.

5089800 so, basically, I thought this story sucked, but when I read it over again, I thought, "maybe this story can be saved" can't promise a date for when it will be updated, but it'll probably happen...

After I see if there are any plot holes

5422642 I am willing to be your edior gives me some entertainment

Greetings, I come from the future to tell you that this story is... still dead.

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