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Schitz


I just like ponies, and can laugh at anything. Except at night.

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Roy, a college student with no care about what tomorrow brings, is killed one day in a fight with a thug. It is then he makes a deal with death to continue living, except he must be one of his agents. He is then sent to Equestria, where he will deal with the supernatural, the unbelievable, and the unthinkable, all while having to listen to the Great and Powerful.

"Why, of all possible ponies, did I get stuck with you?!?"

Takes place in the Soul Reaver Universe, credit for the idea goes to Serpenti, and I do have permission from him to use his idea. All characters from the show My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic are property of Hasbro.

There will be more characters appearing in the story as it progresses.

Please go easy, this is the first real story I had ever written, and any advice or pointing out of errors is greatly appreciated.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 14 )

I feel like i should say something more about this, but can't think of anything. :derpytongue2:

An HIE fic? Well then, let me check this out before I send a review

EDIT: Done reading and I say it's interesting, though a bit rushed in some parts, keep at it

EXCELLENCE IS PRESENT IN THIS FICTION.:pinkiehappy:
Awaiting further releases.:fluttershysad:

did someone say romance tag? upvote

Not my favorite fic, but a green thumb anyways. (I can't STAND it when fics are down voted when they don't deserve it.)

hmmmm...im watching you like a dingo watches a baby.

Okay, if these dislikes are without reason, or over something petty like "EWW ITS AN HIE" or shit like that, don't look at it!. He DOES have my permission, and he's very good at this, so dislikers


PISS OFF!:flutterrage:

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Thanks, I'll make sure to. :twilightsmile:
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And as the story progresses, you shall only become more proud! :rainbowdetermined2:
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Thank you, though it might be a few days before I can get the next chapter out. :twilightsheepish: I promise that i won't take TOO long, though.
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Yes, there shall be romance...much later. :trollestia:
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Then thank you for the support, it's greatly appreciated. :twilightsmile:
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:rainbowderp: Not sure whether to be happy, or afraid. :derpytongue2:
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Thanks for doing that, really appreciated. :twilightsmile:

To the 9 people who liked this:
Thank you, I really do appreciate your support, and will keep writing for you guys/girls. :pinkiehappy:
To the 10 people who disliked this:
Though you may have disliked it, I'm still going to say this: if you took the time to read through it, then disliked it, then thank you for reading it. though next time, I'd really appreciate a comment with that dislike, so I know how to improve not only the story, but my writing style as a whole. :twilightsmile:

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Hey, I'm very protective of my group.:twilightsmile:

Well, here it is. Chapter 1, a long time after i had planned to get it out. :twilightsheepish: Personally, I don't like a lot of it, maybe part of that has to do with i had to write about half of this on my phone in between lines. Ah well, it's still done, and any and all criticism is appreciated. :twilightsmile:

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