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Brony-wan-kenobi


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This story can also be found on Adultfanfiction.net under my other pen name Darthvalgaav. The original Darth has been pissed at me for awhile now since I've been using his name to write porn.

:eeyup: And then I thought- "oh sh!+"

1628197, all I can say is LOL:rainbowlaugh:
And to the story, this is a clop-fic I can follow:pinkiehappy:

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1624881 FUCKING LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

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OH, SHIT¡¡¡:pinkiecrazy:

Honestly... i skipped almost the whole Chapter except for the part with Twi. Its because of the whole soarin thing. I have no probs with soarin, not like before when everything with him was impossible to think about, but when it is with Applejack it becomes the biggest turn off ever and i cant even read romance with them. But except for this the Story is pretty good. Sorry for skipping so much but for me is Applejack x Soarin, no matter in which way, as worse as "2Girls, 1Cup" :pinkiesick: *shiver* and stuff like that.

I can see twilight flipping the page and seeing
Introductions to anal

The part with the authors name of the book Twilight was reading made me laugh my as off. :rainbowlaugh:

Hmmm, nice clop, fairly belivible and interesting plot. I will continue to read this.

I cried for Luna :raritycry:

Poor Luna. :fluttercry: Good call on changing the original chapter idea. Looking forward to reading what happens next before getting back to Twilight.

this chapter has really elevated the story. this is so much more than clop

This is THE best Luna background story.

stil :fluttercry:

Why can't I thumbs up individual chapters?!
:heart:

You've out done yourself sir. Excellent chapter, got me choked up. :raritycry:

2018196
That was the point! So, think I can handle non-clop?

.........I have no words.
Oh wait, here, I think I sense some coming....yep, here they are.

WHY! OH CELESTIA, WHY???
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?????!

That's so sad:fluttershysad:
Yes, you can handle non-clop very well.

2018530well, to me it seems that Twilight sure seems to get choked up around clop.
if you know what I mean :twilightblush:




Choked up. Clop. She sucks the dick. Choked up. Dick. Clop. Cock. Is this making any sense?

Hmm lets see.... MOAR??? also best luna story ever!
Please update! :pinkiehappy:

1624881 the republic strikes again :rainbowlaugh:

Big Mac!? What about Cheerliee? Wait a second?

So...is this story on hiatus or is it canceled?

6242817 dude, either give a clear answer or mark it as cancelled. Saves a lot of heartbreak/annoying questions.
That being said, is this going anywhere? I really like it so far.

Did not see that coming

Ouch! That was so beautiful. A brilliant retelling of the nightmare. And unfortunately very believable.

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