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Why are the ponies nervous? Why do they hide and cower in fear?
And what do Pinkie and Rainbow have to do with it all?
Things aren't going as planned for the two however, and they'll have to deal with a new contender...

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At first I thought it was the Cakes. But then, Rarity and Fluttershy??! Awesomeness!!!!

To be fair, I didn't edit anything beyond the prologue. I was only able to give advice/criticism on the rest, as I was just torn between too many prior commitments. :raritydespair:

Still, I'll take what credit is given. :3

Sick and twisted, in the best possible way.

Ya know, because of the unicorn descriptions I had thought of the Celestial Sisters, but as the day progressed it hinted at Rarity and FlutterShy all along. I liked the part where they pranked the sisters and Celestia was like, "Twilight thought we pranked her." It was at Zecora's song(?) that I really had my suspicion settle in. But oh, it's always the quiet ones that are the most devious. And Fluttershy, using her knowledge of Rainbowdash to trick her like that! Ashame, she should be ashamed! nahh, I can already imagine the kind of enlightened feeling she's having from being such a shy person. Going out and pranking people with a good friend is one of the things that shy people can really look back on and smile every time. Were some of their pranks a little over the top? Haha, maybe, but you can't say they didn't have style. :P

This was a fun one shot that took a bit of time to read. I'm glad I finished it. Left a nice warm feeling and a smile on my face.

Although... What was Scootaloo covered in?

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