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Why do I get the feeling Celestia was talking about the humans?
This story has a lot of potential. I am interested to see where it goes.
1555578>>1555240 One thing i will say is, I plan on making this long as it extends past the games storyline. So hopefully i can get a good 100 chapters.
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Are you thinking about looking into the metro 2034 book or maybe the new game for a sequel?
1556851 *Jumps up and down in excitement* yes! yes! yes! yes! yes! yes! yes! yes! yes!
1556886 I did think about that.
I know if I do then you will be able to read it without reading this one, but you will miss out on the context from Artyom's memories.
1556935 Good to see enthusiasm besides my own.
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I would read it anyway. I like to read the whole story, eve if I already have an idea of how things would go.
1556987 Glad to hear it.
Make the ponies powerless and pitiful muahahahahahaha!
1557750 Hmm let's see ponies with no opposable thumbs, no experience with life or death situations and a language barrier. Seems like they'll be powerless enough as is.
So the next chapter will have them all meet?
1562385 Perhaps... I might have them jump around universes randomly for a bit.
Thanks for the shout man. May the Cheese be with you!
1566518 And may your Pimp hand always be strong.
Oh dear god the language barrier.... I never even thought they would speak in russian since the game is english but it makes sense. Russian is such an easy language to understand without magic anyway so this will be fun.
1570266Я понимаю русский язык немного. I guess the foreign language department of my high school was actually useful in that sense. lol.
and yes Russian has adopted many western words making it easier to grasp than other european languages.
Good chapter. I like the transition with the language, I am guessing that only Twilight will be able to understand him. I am not certain who the person is though, Hunter or Artyom?
but the translations in for us cause i don't feel like doing it my self
1571467 Ill keep in the Russian but sure i might do this. Что вы? (What are you?) Is that better?
I was actually thinking you were going to make Twilight use a spell to make them understand Russian. Also when you make everyone understand it are you going to take it out and leave only the english?
1573205 I may keep it in at certain points. For reasons of, but not excluded to: Excessive cursing, Mindless babble, conversations from side characters, and in extreme cases, Griffins.
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eyup that's much better
RUSSIAN PONIES DA! Korosho rabota
1573603 Спасибо товарищу. Было очень приятно писать.
P.S. Nice avatar.
1573581 Glad to be of service then.
Ah, Khan is a good choice for a first encounter. Well done, good chapter.
1575151 I figured he would try to understand a strange occurence rather then shoot it in the face. Thanks for reading.
SANDVICH!!!
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Agreed! I love me some TF2! 
1578936 mwuahahahhaa... on a slightly related note, I have a rainblower with the rank of epic.
1579011 I am quite jelly good sir! mine is only at Wicked nasty. My hats off to you.
why thank you :D
... if you had a choice, would you make some haunted headgear or the horseless headless horsemann's headtaker?
1579275 imo id go with headtaker. but thats just me.
1579357 :D
Good chapter was good
1585255 Indeed!
Nice chapter, It would not be too surprising if someone from the metro would decide to kill and eat the ponies.
1586268 Eeyup i thought about sending an OC with the main 6 so that could happen, but i couldn't bring myself to do that.
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You could make a bandit attempt to kill one of them and then have Khan or Artyom save them.
1586299 Indeed i can. *changes password to account for fear of Ketvirtas looking at next chapter* Indeed i can...
The calibers are wrong. There are no 5.56mm or .357 guns in the Metro; revolvers use .44 Magnum, and the rifles use the ubiquitous-in-eastern-Europe 5.45x39mm.
You know, you seem to have a bit of a problem regarding your grammar, mostly punctuation and syntax (especially gerundism). I'm willing to help if you are to accept it
1780107 There was no attachment for Ch2 in the email. I assumed you didn't update it.
1780174 and more is on the way! Jack Kellar is the mastermind behind all the revisions, he even wrote
some ofchapter 5... for the most part.1780139 wat
Lemme try again.
1631706 Most of that can be chalked up to artistic license, but we've corrected the knowledge Hunter has of the Dark Ones.
Do a re-read; all chapters have been re-written.
Nice to see an update, hope to see more soon.